Lost Parting Kiss

I still quarrel with the words you said
On the day we loved in bed.
Beneath them hid the pain of evanescence,
Wrapped in a crumpled paper dress.

I cannot forgive the promise you broke -
One more sunrise together, one more shared joke.
At least one parting kiss,
On the deathbed before you left.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 8:54 PM
Yikes. Say it isn't so, Jenish. Where did that parting kiss go? ~ N. O. Closure
Somadas Avatar
November 26, 2025 at 2:11 AM
Not yet.. Thanks Gershon..
Seeker Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:46 PM
Longing for refrains of love to replay, that echoes of endearment return. Beautifully penned, Jenish
Somadas Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 9:13 PM
Thank you Seeker
Poet Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 2:27 AM
Deeply evocative and stirring, woven with threads of yearning and somewhat bittersweet recollections!
Somadas Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 9:14 PM
Thank you Sotto..
George Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 12:15 AM
Very poignant and touching, interspersed with longing and painful memories!
Somadas Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 12:26 AM
Thank you Valsa for your read and comment..
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