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Lost Paradise

our paradise, lost
strewn and scattered, dashed upon
the beaches, our dreams
harrowed by a demon wind
heaven, devastated, drowned

© Gail Foster 8th September 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/19/2017 9:53:00 AM
Yep,its all messed up I gather. Ditto over here
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Gail Foster
Date: 11/6/2017 4:10:00 PM
I don't remember a time when there have been so many winds, Jannie. Those poor people on those islands. How fragile we are.

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