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Lost my freedom

All around me, only darkness How can I get out of this mess That which I got into in my consciousness That which had rendered me tameless It feels like am drowning Water, water around me, surrounding Can’t breathe, can’t talk, its stuffing I can’t even resort to running or flying No one can even hear me shouting Even though my mouth is open and yelling Out loud, wails of danger and distress Where is my savior, coming at the help of his Mistress? Shall I ever see light at the end of the tunnel? Shall I ever be the carefree damsel? The one so happy in the comforting security Of her very own liberty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/30/2013 3:59:00 PM
congrats on win fine poem Shadow x smile
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Date: 8/25/2013 12:46:00 AM
Anoucheka, congrats on winning sixth place in my contest.
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Date: 8/24/2013 6:26:00 PM
many kindred souls will and can relate to this! Congrats on yr win. Morgan
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Date: 8/24/2013 11:28:00 AM
Glad to see this contest judged. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/24/2013 9:09:00 AM
A G, impressive.... , Congratulations!! In Dr. Ram's -Quatern - a sixteen line poem contest. enjoy your day. ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/28/2011 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "MIX" contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2011 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in PD's contest Anoucheka
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 11/27/2011 11:19:00 AM
thank you Bob :)
Date: 11/26/2011 1:58:00 AM
A.G., Congratulations on your wonderful win . I would also like to thank you for the support in my contest. I hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving. Take care, and have yourself a great night,..xoxox~p.d.
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 11/27/2011 11:23:00 AM
Thanks for liking my poem PD