Lost Motion

Lost motion

I saw her always laughing from inside
I wanted to know cause was behind bliss
One day she remained silent I saw
I found her within glamour drowned

She explained job cut money drought 
Boy friend faltered mum turned away
Leaving alone with alien guy
Father ignored to recognize her
Days begin to pass heavily wearily.

Day by day she changed her self into
Indifferent passive, I caught myself to 
Feeling her within a tumble, 
One day I proposed to be her holder, 
She raised her eyes not showing courage 

She replied experience is way to believe
I am happy to find you as a friend of life
Then we started to go hither and thither
On the bus on weekends 
Days passed, found it on lost motion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chalise Avatar
February 1, 2014 at 9:25 AM
Thank you very much for kind read and suggestion.
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 5:00 PM
There is a great poem here. Your language though is stilted. Do you read your poems aloud as you write them? I find that helps with the rhythm. Keep it up, I will return.
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