Lost Love Pains

Her golden dreams have disappeared, 
Leaving her heart drained,
The echo of his sweet voice keeps her 
awake,
Lost love pains and lingering longings 
ache.

Waiting for the light of morn,
It’s so different from the old 
norm,
Whispers of sweet nothings
all gone, 
Old memories nag, but she fights 
hard to stay strong.

Her broken heart is irreversible,
Imprints of happiness he left behind,
erasing them is impossible,
Words and thoughts are jumbled,
Her heart, a shattered vessel, 
finally crumbles.





by Zyrool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Velasco Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 7:54 PM
A touching and heartfelt poem—your words capture the ache of lost love so tenderly. The imagery of “a shattered vessel” and the lingering echo of his voice are especially poignant. It beautifully expresses that quiet battle between holding on and letting go. Heartfelt and relatable.
Gifford Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 3:17 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful words, Rowena. Means a lot. Sending blessings your way, my friend.
Hind Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 9:35 AM
Beautiful, though sad- the rhyme at the end I loved
Gifford Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 10:12 AM
Hello Paige thank you for your visit and your lovely words. Sending Blessings your way.
Crandall Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 7:12 PM
Your poem makes me feel for this heartbroken person. Why is heartbreak something that I think we have all experienced?
Gifford Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 5:48 AM
Hello David, thank you for the read and your support. Sadly, I think you’re right, my poet friend. Have great rest of the week.
Greenhough Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 3:49 PM
I can feel this poem in the way that a lost love not only hurts, but also disrupts daily routine. Hope is that time heals.
Gifford Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 10:49 AM
Hello Hilda, thank you for your support. Time is a great healer. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead, my friend.
Ashley Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 8:46 AM
Dear Zyrool, soulful poet, the poignant beauty of your "lost love pains" are palpable in their heartbeat and heartache. I feel your verse, it resonates deeply within my heart too, with its tender turmoil. Warmest wishes my gifted poet friend.. ~Susan
Gifford Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 8:53 AM
Hello Susan, thank you so much for checking out my work, much appreciated. Wishing you a fabulous weekend my friend. Stay Blessed.
Kendrick Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Love/the one loved that disappears is a hard emotional part of our lives. I hope that by writing this one that emotional healing has begun. Thanks for sharing this emotive work with us. Sara K
Gifford Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 8:54 AM
Hello Sara, thank you for the read and support, means a lot. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 2:13 AM
Death is cruel, It is always a pity when someone dies. But time eventually heals.
Gifford Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 8:56 AM
Hello Victor, thank you for your kind words, So true Father Time does heal. Have a lovely weekend my poet friend.
M  Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 11:38 AM
A tender and very beautiful poem Zyrool….Debx
Gifford Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 1:32 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely words, Deb. Means a lot. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, my friend.
Rolland Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 5:36 PM
looks like remembering some disasters, beautifully penned have a nice week end poet
Gifford Avatar
May 9, 2025 at 1:30 PM
Thank you so much for dropping by and your kind words, Yann. Wishing you a fabulous weekend, my poet friend.
Andresen Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 5:48 AM
- "Old memories nag",and they are hard to forget ... a deeply moving poem Zyrool - hugs
Gifford Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Thank you for your kind words and support, Anne-Lise. Have a lovely day my friend.Stay Blessed.
George Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 9:03 PM
A heart touching write. Life is never a smooth ride. It is interrupted by loss and deprivation. It is so hard to forget a love experience that once made her weave beautiful dreams. Some people are irreplaceable in life. When we lose them, we feel the ground slipping away from under our feet. All the Best dear Zyrool.
Gifford Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Hello Valsa, thank you for the visit and your kind words. Have a wonderful day. Stay Blessed.
Winter Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 6:29 PM
Dear Zyrool, this is so beautifully written. Your poem is the true example of turning pain into something exquisitely beautiful through poetry. Best, Anne
Gifford Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 7:14 AM
Hello Anne, thank you for the visit and your beautiful words. Sending Blessings your way, fellow poet.
Empress Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 5:09 AM
Dear Zyrool, What a most deeply emotive poem that depicts how heartbreak feels like! Youv expressed so well here, how one feels when haunted by memories and overwhelmed with emotions that needs moving on from. I felt this one! As the emotional pain one feels can sometimes turn physical and its never easy! Your words flow so effortlessly, and in such an evocative manner! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always!
Gifford Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 7:12 AM
Hello Ink, thank you for your beautifully uplifting words. I wasn’t sure about this one, glad I posted now. Sending Blessings and wishing you a wonderful day, my friend.
Ansell Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 2:52 AM
Hello Zyrool, Many people try and write poetry about loss, and few succeed like you have in my opinion. Hicely written. Experiencing this thing called 'Life' is all about change and accompanying loss it seems. Blessings, Allen PS: Thank you for your comment on my poem. I have been away and am just catching up on things.
Gifford Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 7:20 AM
Hello Allen, thank you for the read and your kind words, means a lot. Hope you had a wonderful time while you were away. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Have a great day, my poet friend.
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May 5, 2025 at 3:49 PM
Hello Zyrool, No doubt about it, she is heart broken. She had deep feelings for him, she still thinkis about him. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 10:37 AM
Hello Zyrool, You are very welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Gifford Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 2:39 AM
Hello Darlene, thank you for the read and your comment, much appreciated. Have a great day, my friend.
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