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Lost Love Pains

Her golden dreams have disappeared, Leaving her heart drained, The echo of his sweet voice keeps her awake, Lost love pains and lingering longings ache. Waiting for the light of morn, It’s so different from the old norm, Whispers of sweet nothings all gone, Old memories nag, but she fights hard to stay strong. Her broken heart is irreversible, Imprints of happiness he left behind, erasing them is impossible, Words and thoughts are jumbled, Her heart, a shattered vessel, finally crumbles. by Zyrool

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/14/2025 9:35:00 AM

Beautiful, though sad- the rhyme at the end I loved

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/14/2025 10:12:00 AM

Hello Paige thank you for your visit and your lovely words. Sending Blessings your way.

David Crandall

Date: 5/12/2025 7:12:00 PM

Your poem makes me feel for this heartbroken person. Why is heartbreak something that I think we have all experienced?

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/13/2025 5:48:00 AM

Hello David, thank you for the read and your support. Sadly, I think you’re right, my poet friend. Have great rest of the week.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/11/2025 3:49:00 PM

I can feel this poem in the way that a lost love not only hurts, but also disrupts daily routine. Hope is that time heals.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/12/2025 10:49:00 AM

Hello Hilda, thank you for your support. Time is a great healer. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead, my friend.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/10/2025 8:46:00 AM

Dear Zyrool, soulful poet, the poignant beauty of your "lost love pains" are palpable in their heartbeat and heartache. I feel your verse, it resonates deeply within my heart too, with its tender turmoil. Warmest wishes my gifted poet friend.. ~Susan

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/10/2025 8:53:00 AM

Hello Susan, thank you so much for checking out my work, much appreciated. Wishing you a fabulous weekend my friend. Stay Blessed.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/10/2025 7:20:00 AM

Love/the one loved that disappears is a hard emotional part of our lives. I hope that by writing this one that emotional healing has begun. Thanks for sharing this emotive work with us. Sara K

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/10/2025 8:54:00 AM

Hello Sara, thank you for the read and support, means a lot. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/10/2025 2:13:00 AM

Death is cruel, It is always a pity when someone dies. But time eventually heals.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/10/2025 8:56:00 AM

Hello Victor, thank you for your kind words, So true Father Time does heal. Have a lovely weekend my poet friend.

Deb M

Date: 5/9/2025 11:38:00 AM

A tender and very beautiful poem Zyrool….Debx

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/9/2025 1:32:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely words, Deb. Means a lot. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, my friend.

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/7/2025 5:36:00 PM

looks like remembering some disasters, beautifully penned have a nice week end poet

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/9/2025 1:30:00 PM

Thank you so much for dropping by and your kind words, Yann. Wishing you a fabulous weekend, my poet friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/7/2025 5:48:00 AM

- "Old memories nag",and they are hard to forget ... a deeply moving poem Zyrool - hugs

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/7/2025 7:11:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words and support, Anne-Lise. Have a lovely day my friend.Stay Blessed.

Valsa George

Date: 5/6/2025 9:03:00 PM

A heart touching write. Life is never a smooth ride. It is interrupted by loss and deprivation. It is so hard to forget a love experience that once made her weave beautiful dreams. Some people are irreplaceable in life. When we lose them, we feel the ground slipping away from under our feet. All the Best dear Zyrool.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/7/2025 7:13:00 AM

Hello Valsa, thank you for the visit and your kind words. Have a wonderful day. Stay Blessed.

Anne Winter

Date: 5/6/2025 6:29:00 PM

Dear Zyrool, this is so beautifully written. Your poem is the true example of turning pain into something exquisitely beautiful through poetry. Best, Anne

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/7/2025 7:14:00 AM

Hello Anne, thank you for the visit and your beautiful words. Sending Blessings your way, fellow poet.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/6/2025 5:09:00 AM

Dear Zyrool, What a most deeply emotive poem that depicts how heartbreak feels like! Youv expressed so well here, how one feels when haunted by memories and overwhelmed with emotions that needs moving on from. I felt this one! As the emotional pain one feels can sometimes turn physical and its never easy! Your words flow so effortlessly, and in such an evocative manner! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always!

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/6/2025 7:12:00 AM

Hello Ink, thank you for your beautifully uplifting words. I wasn’t sure about this one, glad I posted now. Sending Blessings and wishing you a wonderful day, my friend.

Allen Ansell

Date: 5/6/2025 2:52:00 AM

Hello Zyrool, Many people try and write poetry about loss, and few succeed like you have in my opinion. Hicely written. Experiencing this thing called 'Life' is all about change and accompanying loss it seems. Blessings, Allen PS: Thank you for your comment on my poem. I have been away and am just catching up on things.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/6/2025 7:20:00 AM

Hello Allen, thank you for the read and your kind words, means a lot. Hope you had a wonderful time while you were away. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Have a great day, my poet friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/5/2025 3:49:00 PM

Hello Zyrool, No doubt about it, she is heart broken. She had deep feelings for him, she still thinkis about him. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/6/2025 10:37:00 AM

Hello Zyrool, You are very welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/6/2025 2:39:00 AM

Hello Darlene, thank you for the read and your comment, much appreciated. Have a great day, my friend.

Tom Woody

Date: 5/5/2025 4:36:00 AM

Tragic when we lose someone who is irreplaceable. Your emotions come through clearly

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 5/5/2025 9:39:00 AM

Hello Tom, thank you so much for the read and support. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead, my friend. Stay Blessed.