Lost Love and Eternal Love

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In the summer we'd meet and we'd sip iced tea, and the waiter saw kisses as people passed; as I whispered my feelings into your ear, I was sure in my heart that our love would last. Love can be a moment or an eternity. Now the winter is here and your heart has closed, all the warmth that we shared is now frigid cold; and I wonder what changed; why I lost your love, as I sit at our table alone, unloved and old. Love can be a moment or an eternity. In the fall we went for long peaceful walks, hand in hand in lust, but still so unsure; I wanted you to say, I love you dear, then in time, you asked and I said, yes sir. Love can be a moment or an eternity. In the spring, so excited we married forever, it was a perfect union and full of beauty; and although God took you home one day, our sweet love will last for all of eternity. _________________________ November 25, 2015 Poetry/Rhyme/Lost Love and Eternal Love Copyright Protected, ID 15-729-675-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Collaboration with Heather Ober

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Date: 12/3/2015 9:34:00 AM
Another lovely collaboration for you BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/3/2015 3:18:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting, yes another collab, I seem to be on a roll with collaborations, Jack is the top 2 verses and I am the last 2 verses, he is a wonderful and a talented poet for sure, hopefully we do well in the duet contest ~
Date: 11/26/2015 10:43:00 AM
Truly great collaboration Broken Wings and Jack. Super 7 from me and a great joy to read this fine morn!A7
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Date: 11/26/2015 12:11:00 PM
Robert thanks for the visit and the 7 appreciate
Date: 11/26/2015 10:03:00 AM
such a graceful duet of affection so warm and unending, constance..how endearing!..huggs
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Constance La France
Date: 11/26/2015 12:10:00 PM
Nette thanks for visiting my poetry and for the nice comment
Date: 11/25/2015 6:55:00 PM
Wow! Amazing duet Broken Wings and Jack Horne...Very well written, as always :)-lu *smiles*
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Constance La France
Date: 11/25/2015 7:21:00 PM
Laura, thanks so much, for the amazing and the forever support ~
Date: 11/25/2015 6:15:00 PM
Beautiful but with your trademark sadness - a lovely collaboration good luck Jack and Constance:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 11/25/2015 6:19:00 PM
Jan, thanks so much for the visit, yes their is sadness in the lost love, and the dead eternal love... love can be a moment or an eternity ~
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