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Lost Love

She weeps at the ocean, swallowing tears She thought she had met a sweet, humble, man Then, his furtive actions confirmed her fears Waves crash, where a nonchalant person ran Here on the beach where they met in the past Where all kisses and promises were made Now his shallow heart haunts her very fast All broken with shells in blown dunes that fade Lost love disappears in the salty mist Deep pain engulfs her on the empty shore Mistaken, lonely, so shocked by the twist She reminds herself there will be no more She will be an ascetic if she must Until ocean tides replenish her trust 1/15/18 *Entry for English sonnet Lost Love Contest. Sponsor: John Hamilton Words included: ascetic, humble, furtive, nonchalant, shallow

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Date: 2/12/2018 6:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Heidi, nicely done and enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 2/12/2018 4:35:00 PM
Returning with big congratulations, Heidi for your excellent win with your beautifully sad sonnet of lost love. ~Susan
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2018 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 2/12/2018 8:17:00 AM
Congrats Heidi for a nice placement in my contest!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2018 8:49:00 AM
Thank you John :)
Date: 1/26/2018 11:10:00 AM
Nicely stated, wishing you good luck in the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/26/2018 11:12:00 AM
Thank you :) I appreciate your comment.
Date: 1/19/2018 10:48:00 AM
This melancholy, yet beautiful poem captures the essence of emotions experienced by losing a love, Heidi. Truly sad and deeply touching poem. Your pen pricks the soul w/pure honesty and crestfallen grace. Excellent poem by a very talented poetess. Love and joy always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/20/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thank you for your kind feedback Freddie :)
Date: 1/17/2018 8:18:00 PM
Nicely penned, Heidi, and I am always drawn by poems that take one to the sea! GL in the contest :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/18/2018 3:36:00 AM
Thank you Laura. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 1/16/2018 12:35:00 PM
I can feel the loss, Heidi, the setting of the ocean is perfectly suited to expressing your thoughts, xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2018 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Mike. I wrote it for the theme of the contest, and tried to get emotions across with words to feel as he wanted :)
Date: 1/16/2018 9:57:00 AM
Well done, Heidi, I can feel the pain of lost love. Best of luck. John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2018 1:03:00 PM
Thank you John. I was hoping the emotions could be felt with the words as he wants for the contest :)
Date: 1/16/2018 9:23:00 AM
such a sad sonnet Heidi, it flows and rhymes very well..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2018 1:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Silent One :)
Date: 1/15/2018 9:22:00 PM
The heartaches we go thru for the sake of love... You did an awesome job her Miss Heidi, a headache for sure! Hugs and smiles :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/16/2018 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Akkina :)
Date: 1/15/2018 5:15:00 PM
You depicted this story of heartbreak well Heidi..your rhymes flow smoothly in this difficult to write form..best for a win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2018 5:56:00 PM
Thank you for your support Vijay :)
Date: 1/15/2018 4:01:00 PM
Well done dear poet I'm going to look this contest up
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2018 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Frederic. I look forward to your entry if you decide to do it :)
Date: 1/15/2018 1:03:00 PM
Such heartache is depicted in your sad and lovely sonnet Heidi. Wonderful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. ~Susan
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2018 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Susan. I believe he wanted the feelings of lost love to come across for the contest, I appreciate your feedback :)
Date: 1/15/2018 12:58:00 PM
A sad tale of heartbreak Heidi, well written...GL in the contest..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/15/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph :)

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