Poesy Relish Poet Dodoitsu

Lost Love

what is this feeling, not grief
my heart wail, constrict and hurt 
why the promise feel distant 
i still wait in vain. 


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distance gives way to longing 
a need to meet and devour 
the strong thread binding two hearts 
grows weaker with time.

© (3 Feb '15)

Contest: Dodoitsu by Dr. Ram

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Liam Mcdaid February 5, 2015 at 5:37 PM powerful emotional pen nadiya deep excellent piece bless you Poesy Relish February 5, 2015 at 8:58 PM Thank you again Liam... be blessed

Jack Ellison February 4, 2015 at 5:12 PM Great emotional write my dear Nadiya! Must visit some of your others! Love and hugs, Jack XOX Poesy Relish February 4, 2015 at 9:21 PM Thank you dear Jack... pleased that you took time ti read my poems...love, nad!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 4, 2015 at 2:59 AM Excellent write Nad. God bless>love>Good luck -rajat Poesy Relish February 4, 2015 at 4:05 AM Thank you Rajat... hope its worthy of your praise... nad!

Ravi Sathasivam February 3, 2015 at 11:13 PM Excellent.Very emotional write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Poesy Relish February 4, 2015 at 12:13 AM Thank you Ravi for your comment and visit... regards, nad!

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2015 at 6:20 PM this is nice to see. I did not even know this contest had gotten started. Good luck in it! Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 8:43 PM Thank you Andrea for dropping by... hugs,nad!

Laura Leiser February 3, 2015 at 4:54 PM The strong emotions of conflict and love lost are well written in this poem. Great job! Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 8:42 PM Thank you Laura for reading my pen and your lovely words... regards, nad!

Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 3:42 PM such an intense feeling of longing and loneliness - good luck in the contest:-) a 7 from me :-) Hugs Jan xx Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 8:41 PM Thank you dear friend... be blessed... nad!

John Squires February 3, 2015 at 2:54 PM Good expression of emotions, nice write. Poesy Relish February 3, 2015 at 3:29 PM Thank you very much John