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Lost Love

Come all you knights and maidens a gathering for you in the jungles of life Traveling to the center of our world To you all I hail take me to this other land Showing me magic spells Like the warlock of old You give me portions of love in the land of milk and honey Dreams become reality With all the emotions A man or a woman possess Vanishing in the Bermuda triangle The triangle of emotions Like moses the sea parts Paradise lost hidden in the storm Tossing me every which way Spiraling around in circles In whirlpool of air my breath labored Crushing like the great boa To breathe no more Pain and suffering pass us by All of a sudden I am there A mystical land beautiful flowers everywhere Smells of paradise Flowers of many colors a wonder to the beholder Beauty as far as the eyes can see Bards with magical words Turns a desert to paradise The land of giants Among'st giants who raise me up With magic words you walk on water Waterfalls fountains of forever young The departed never age Youth forever love Standing tall I am in paradise In my hand a quill We stand giants blown away each breath We speak of dreams of love Happiness in a fairytale ending Stories of pain with that of suffering Of good fortune and woe Dreamers a circle of poets With a pen they take you to the door Come dine with me at this table We are knights and maidens Lost in this magical realm Created from love Emotions from our hearts Hate the burning emotion of love In the sunset of our mind paradise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/9/2013 4:53:00 PM
Yes, being a poet is great! We can go wherever our pen can take us, and we bring everyone else along for the ride. Whether, it is a trip to a fantasy land or deep within ourselves, we can go anywhere we want to! It is the only true freedom in this world!...Excellent piece! You might like my poem "Heaven For A Poet".
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Date: 9/9/2013 3:46:00 AM
I love your references throughout; they really enhance the enchanting beauty of this composition. Dreamy and passionate. I love it! Always, Laura
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/9/2013 4:37:00 AM
LAURA THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT HEARTFELT BEAUTIFUL GREATLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/8/2013 10:45:00 AM
You have a very beautiful imaginative power and you also know how to give voice to ur thoughts...I loved this one too. Cheers !
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/8/2013 11:15:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR THE SWEET VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Date: 9/8/2013 6:11:00 AM
The sunset of our minds-paradise..a wonderful place to be..to.dream within a dream and stay there forever..Dreams are amazing healers to sad realities..so touched by this.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/8/2013 7:04:00 AM
SOMETIMES THEY ARE THE GUIDING LIGHT OF TRUTH WHEN IT LOOSES ITS SPARKLE YOU BEGIN LIVING IN A DREAM THANK YOU DEARLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
Date: 9/8/2013 5:08:00 AM
:) Glad to be part of this magical world that you have so aptly described. Yes, we who love words know how easy it is to lose ourselves in this world...Great descriptive piece....
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/8/2013 5:21:00 AM
its easier sometimes to live in dreams and escape from reality wonderful comment deeply appreciated

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