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LOST IT

LOST IT trying to remember what I forgot – what was it i forgot to forget to remember? … now where was i? forgot your name getting old your face is familiar our fiftieth anniversary? oh! thank you dear whatever your name is Dave Austin

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Date: 1/4/2015 9:24:00 AM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Sara
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Date: 12/13/2014 1:16:00 PM
I do this often, especially when I'm writing, Daver.:( If I don't write something down right away, I forget what I'd been thinking. I don't think of you as a person who is losing it, you're very sharp and perceptive! Still this could be a sorrowful situation for others. A winter wanderland day...my thoughts keep wandering off and getting stuck in drifts.:) Keep well, love, Mikki
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Date: 12/6/2014 8:04:00 PM
Waiting for a new poem, my friend!! I've got a card on the way to you!!
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Date: 12/2/2014 9:53:00 AM
It helps to have a sense of humor about it. Sad but true. I can't seem to call my kids by their names, instead of their siblings names. They don't bother to correct me as they sometimes do it too! I enjoyed your poem Dave.
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Date: 12/2/2014 6:02:00 AM
This is beautiful, funny, and sad. Well done, Daver.
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Date: 11/28/2014 10:34:00 PM
haha. I really like your humor, my friend.
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Date: 11/28/2014 4:44:00 PM
I got it!
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Date: 11/28/2014 3:40:00 PM
Sadly this is my mum some days :-( no fun seeing them deteriorate Daver:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/4/2014 2:12:00 PM
Sorry. I just wasn't thinking when I wrote these. Love, daver