Andrea Dietrich Poet Free verse

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Lost In Your Love

Lost in your love,
I float above the ocean
on wild waves of fevered ecstacy.
I melt into your gaze
as you send me to the moon
with your passionate kisses.

I don’t care where I’m going.
It can be to a brand new galaxy
beyond the stars -
bright stars that glisten like your skin 
which  feels so right
as it melds into my own.

I only want to live
inside this precious moment,
sparkling for an eternity -
with stars in our eyes
and knowing the bliss
of being  as one with you.

Jan. 24, 2020 for Brenda Chiri's Picture Prompt Poetry Contest
and now for John Hamilton's 'Your best free verse 2020' Poetry Contest 

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Aditi Mishra May 26, 2020 at 1:44 PM Your words create a mystical romance overflowing from your beautiful heart and that reflects through the soothing imagery you have used. Keep writing Andrea. I love your poems. Congratulations on your win :)

John Hamilton May 26, 2020 at 9:48 AM I don't know what happened to my comment from yesterday, but I'll try again. A very romantic write Andrea, I was a little surprised when I found out it was you, congrats on a nice win! John Hamilton May 26, 2020 at 8:56 PM I guess I don't read enough of your work, gotta correct that!! Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2020 at 12:23 PM why surprised? I do lots of romance but not many as free verse! Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2020 at 12:23 PM thanks for the win, John.

John Watt May 25, 2020 at 9:13 PM Ooh la la! Congrats on your win for this sensual romantic write

Debjani Mitra May 25, 2020 at 8:26 PM Wow Andrea, some poems leave you speech less..this one is a wonderful piece where you made love so adorable,.. it's like holding the moon

John Watt February 16, 2020 at 12:57 AM Back to say, well done and congrats!

Edward Ibeh February 15, 2020 at 9:33 AM Fantastic poem, as always! Heartiest congratulations on your top win, Andrea:-)

Brenda Chiri January 28, 2020 at 12:32 AM Andrea beautiful! From melting into their gaze to stars glistening like the stars! Beautiful congrats on your win and thank you for entering!;)

Caren Krutsinger January 27, 2020 at 10:09 AM You are truly a romantic, Andrea, you cannot hide that now.

Kai Michael Neumann January 27, 2020 at 5:31 AM That is such a loving take on the theme. Bliss in its purest form ...

Mike Bayles January 26, 2020 at 12:43 PM This is great, Andrea, very passionate.

John Watt January 25, 2020 at 9:46 PM Another romantic and sensual winner. I like the passion played out on the celestial canvas, especially "I melt into your gaze as you send me to the moon". Well done and GL ~ John

Running Wolves January 25, 2020 at 5:03 PM oh this one makes me feel all warm and fuzzy... excellent write...

Jennifer Proxenos January 25, 2020 at 7:00 AM A passionate write Andrea - I love the way you include the galaxy and beyond the stars - ' and knowing the bliss of being as one with you'. Romantic and sensual - I'm certain it will be a win. Blessings, Jennifer.

Ravi Sathasivam January 25, 2020 at 12:06 AM Excellent. Lovely romantic story. Enjoyed reading it.

Quoth Theraven January 24, 2020 at 10:47 PM Andrea, Always glad for the magic made in a poet's spirited creation. -Richard

Agnes Krampe January 24, 2020 at 6:23 PM How romantic. Good luck in the contest, Andrea.

Charlie Smith January 24, 2020 at 2:44 PM Wonderfully romantic,Andrea, best wishes...

Chris Green January 24, 2020 at 11:13 AM Beautifully done Andrea. This one speaks in the soft tones of love. Best wishes in the contest.

Tom Cunningham January 24, 2020 at 10:18 AM Very sensual and romantic Andrea, love your interpretation. Good luck. Tom