Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Tanka

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Lost In Your Desire

~Lost In Your Desire~ 
(Tanka) 


Know you're in my heart 
and in my head and my blood 
Forever love you 
that in this will never stop 
feeling way I do for you 

Since you came to me 
I just fell in love with you 
Thrilled with all this true love 
that grows in me and stays strong 
and nothing for me the same 

Now I'm lost in you 
You're voice is so seductive 
Feel fire of your love 
your hands are all over me 
and now in your Love I'm  lost 

Burning in your fire 
is your love that keeps me warm 
one that keeps me sane 
In the night my name you whisper 
and just quench in your desire. 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2015 


January,14,2015

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Darkland Poetry January 14, 2015 at 2:44 AM Wowza! Hot hot hot. I LOVE! Dorian Petersen Potter January 14, 2015 at 7:07 AM Thank you so kindly Rachel, dear friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. Much appreciated! So glad you love it. Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "

M. L. Kiser January 13, 2015 at 9:54 PM Breathtakingly romantic! One is easily caught up in your passion. Dorian Petersen Potter January 14, 2015 at 6:57 AM Thank you so kindly M.L. Kiser, for your very wonderful visit and comment my dear friend. Much appreciated! :) Have a lovely day! Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^

Jack Ellison January 13, 2015 at 9:43 PM I'm pretending I'm the object of your passion!!! LOL I can dream can't I? LOL Loving hugs, Jack xxx Dorian Petersen Potter January 14, 2015 at 6:56 AM Hi Jack! Thank you so kindly for your very wonderful visit and comment my very sweet and dearest friend. Much appreciated! :) Have a lovely day! Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^