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Lost In You

Lying in the emerald grass, I gaze upon you, transfixed in the moment, your beauty astounding. I watch you breathe as my finger tips slowly trace ribbons through the cerise highlights in your long saffron hair. Gently I caress the contours of your closed eyes, then your cheeks. Your lips curl in a subtle smile as I, oh so slowly, follow the curve of your neck down the valley of your soft skin to your low cut tangerine dress. With each lilac button that I release it falls away revealing your smooth ivory skin. You gasp gently when a cool breeze tickles you and I watch in enraptured desire as your bistre peaks rise firm above your bosom. With the touch of a feather my fingers draw circles and figure eights around your navel. Your body tenses, as goose bumps cover your skin, and your smile tightens. I lean forward, your crimson lips beckoning. The softness of your kiss presses against me and lingers for a long moment. "I love you," I whisper and your beautiful eyes awake. Titanium sparkles cast glitter in their deep sapphire pools and I fall, lost forever, into your bottomless loving abyss.
03/14/16

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Date: 4/12/2016 4:33:00 AM
Nice poem with well matched title. Ending is also very good.I like it.............with love.
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James Inman
Date: 4/12/2016 7:29:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Manmath.
Date: 3/28/2016 12:10:00 AM
James, Congratulations on your awesome "Colourfication Win." ~LINDA~
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James Inman
Date: 3/28/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thank you PD.
Date: 3/24/2016 5:39:00 PM
Hi James, That's a nice feast of color and richly descriptive imagery--very well-crafted. Congrats on your Colourification contest win. Cheers, Brian
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James Inman
Date: 3/24/2016 9:54:00 PM
Brian, thanks for the great comment.
Date: 3/23/2016 9:02:00 PM
SENSUAL, COLORFUL, AND WELL WRITTEN MY FRIEND. A very creative and enjoyable piece.A7 Bravo on the win..
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James Inman
Date: 3/24/2016 9:52:00 PM
Thank you Robert, I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/22/2016 7:46:00 PM
Hi James, a wonderful sensual write. Congratulations on your win in the contest. I savoured the read James. It goes into my faves....Vlad.
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James Inman
Date: 3/22/2016 8:57:00 PM
A very kind comment from you Vlad, thank you.
Date: 3/18/2016 6:04:00 PM
A tasty sensual piece for the eyes (and imagination) ... I enjoyed how you described the shapes, curves and angles ... nice to draw a map ;) ... best of luck!
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James Inman
Date: 3/22/2016 8:54:00 PM
Thank you Timothy. A treasure map.
Date: 3/16/2016 10:24:00 PM
Wow! What a sensual write, enjoyed it. Hugs, Bobby
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James Inman
Date: 3/16/2016 11:10:00 PM
Thanks Anindya.
Date: 3/15/2016 7:01:00 PM
This is a very sensual and lovely poem James. I agree with Andrea, this is Romanticism instead of free verse. GL in the contest. I am sure this will do well. ; )
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James Inman
Date: 3/15/2016 7:50:00 PM
Thank you Connie. I took yours and Andrea's advice.
Date: 3/15/2016 3:16:00 PM
I'd call it romanticism, not free verse! And the word is breathe (for the verb)
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James Inman
Date: 3/15/2016 7:48:00 PM
Thank you for pointing out both things, I've corrected both. Never thought of myself as a romantic writer.
Date: 3/15/2016 3:15:00 PM
AWESOME comes to my mind upon reading this one. I just love this to pieces. a FAVE on this beauty!!
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James Inman
Date: 3/15/2016 7:46:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. You are so sweet.
Date: 3/15/2016 1:58:00 PM
James, this is a beautiful love poem, I really like your presentation and use of colors, I am loving this 7 ~
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James Inman
Date: 3/16/2016 5:50:00 AM
Thank you for your beautiful comment BW.

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