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Lost In Us

Shall we dance, my dear? they're playing our song let's get lost in us your strong hand in mine my heart in your hands All through the night, on the dance floor, our steps in time a waltz of love Take the lead I'll follow united Floating lost in us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/10/2012 12:09:00 AM
this is beautiful, the image and emotions flow through along as I watched the dance..
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Date: 3/8/2012 10:35:00 AM
Charming Romantic write above! [Melee is for the Joycian contest neolith-ICK behavior is for Joe Flacks Contest on Contest..I'm really out there on a branch with that one for Joe because he doesn't like me to use BIG words LOL..OH well yes the Joycian writing freed me UP!] Light & Love
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Date: 3/8/2012 2:31:00 AM
Romantic poem Rhonda....a waltz of love. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/8/2012 1:50:00 AM
Rhonda great job, I like it..David
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Date: 3/8/2012 12:04:00 AM
While reading this, images of Yul Brynner and Deborah Kerr dancing together in "The King and I" came to my mind. This is a nice example of a diminished hexaverse.
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Date: 3/7/2012 11:06:00 PM
LOVE IT. you sure are good at this form!!
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Date: 3/7/2012 9:41:00 PM
that's a lovely and romantic poem.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you, Hugs!Erich
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Date: 3/7/2012 9:34:00 PM
Very good romantic write.Nice use of form.Enjoyed the read Rhonda.
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