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Lost In Time

Gone by, so many moments so many nights and days Lost in time, those dreamy eyes, playful smile and the innocent face First love, first kiss and the heartbreak a soft wind blew and wafted it away Bohemian friends, stories to tell just waved goodbye and left partway.

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Judy Konos

Date: 5/29/2015 11:20:00 AM

"It's like a storm That cuts a path It breaks your will It feels like that You think you're lost But you're not lost on your own you're not alone" . . . .You write the most beautiful words with depth and meaning from beginning to end...Thank You ....from all of us....

Nirode Ray
Date: 5/29/2015 12:20:00 PM

Hi Judy, those were not my words. I borrowed those lines from a song by Rascal Flatts to cheer up Edwin (our soupy friend). That's why I put those words in quote/unquote. Nevertheless, thank you for your nice words for me. I will indulge those any time.

Michael Soto

Date: 5/12/2015 3:16:00 PM

This is a beautiful piece. I enjoyed it very much. ;)

Nirode Ray
Date: 5/13/2015 10:13:00 PM

Many many thanks.

Thomas Martin

Date: 5/8/2015 3:27:00 PM

Enjoyed this very much!! Like the compactness and description.

Nirode Ray
Date: 5/9/2015 2:34:00 PM

Thanks for your comment.