Nirode Ray Poet Free verse

Lost In Time

Gone by, so many moments
so many nights and days
Lost in time, those dreamy eyes,
playful smile and the innocent face
First love, first kiss and the heartbreak
a soft wind blew and wafted it away
Bohemian friends, stories to tell
just waved goodbye and left partway.

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Judy Konos May 29, 2015 at 11:20 AM "It's like a storm That cuts a path It breaks your will It feels like that You think you're lost But you're not lost on your own you're not alone" . . . .You write the most beautiful words with depth and meaning from beginning to end...Thank You ....from all of us.... Nirode Ray May 29, 2015 at 12:20 PM Hi Judy, those were not my words. I borrowed those lines from a song by Rascal Flatts to cheer up Edwin (our soupy friend). That's why I put those words in quote/unquote. Nevertheless, thank you for your nice words for me. I will indulge those any time.

Michael Soto May 12, 2015 at 3:16 PM This is a beautiful piece. I enjoyed it very much. ;) Nirode Ray May 13, 2015 at 10:13 PM Many many thanks.

Thomas Martin May 8, 2015 at 3:27 PM Enjoyed this very much!! Like the compactness and description. Nirode Ray May 9, 2015 at 2:34 PM Thanks for your comment.