Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Poetry/Rhyme/Lost in Thoughts
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Written, April 20, 2025
For the International Contest, Threading The Lines 
Sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 04/23/2025

FIRST PLACE

Lost in Thoughts

Lost in thoughts and memories I hide away,
telling myself get up do something but I do not:
get motivated I say within talking to me all day,
to shake this doom I have struggled and fought;
oh, will the grief of tears end I pray !
How is it that the details of all deaths I have not forgot ?

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Krishnanand Guptar April 24, 2025 at 8:13 AM Congratulations , dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a very inspirational poem penned with great skill. May the Light that lights all lights ever rest with you and illuminate your path.

Crystol Woods April 23, 2025 at 10:14 AM Very impressive form! Congratulations! Xo

Joseph May April 23, 2025 at 9:12 AM A poignant write Constance, Congrats on your win

Kathleen Hassall April 20, 2025 at 2:38 PM Grief is hard, and it's different for each person. I pray that you will progress through your grief. I have had grief counseling for two different losses and it does help. Hospice in my area offers Music Therapy and that was very helpful. This is a very nice poem, although a bit heartbreaking, I think because I have been there. Constance La France April 23, 2025 at 4:25 AM Kathleen, grief is a dagger to the heart and soul. Thank you for the compliment. I struggle with my grief but somehow I am living a good life, it is something that never leaves me, I can push it away but it has a way of creeping back, blessings ~