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Lost In Thought

walking my dog looking across and over mountains a breath taking view blue skies white fluffy clouds floating i began patting my dogs head feeling so lonely loosing myself inside the mind just gave the dog a great big hug sweet sadness carried on a fresh breeze feeling the yawning in the silence of beauty sweeping inside holding out the key standing thinking of one beautiful rose blushing angels sparkling thoughts sharing spring time sheep lambing listening to the bleats of the baby lambs my eyes they spot a bunch of primroses plucking one gently putting it to my nose pictures flashed in this mind i began smiling looking at such love a dream in the soft gentle fragrance scenting such beauty floating spring breeze tear drops fall smiling deeply i never stop loving until the end i deserve to be happy listening to birds softly singing a sweet song blowing in a mountain breeze tasting spring floating upon air oh how i await that gentle dream beauty who softy sweeps over this ocean on wings of an angel ~ ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/5/2014 6:56:00 AM
Liam, As i started reading I thought "this poem has no punctuation". However, as I read it became clear this is how the mind thinks, in spurts and quick short sentences. Once I slid into the rhythm of the poem, the rhythm of the thoughts, it flowed as thoughts so often do. Nicely written.
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