Lost In Thought

walking my dog
looking across
and over mountains 
a breath taking view
blue skies 
white fluffy 
clouds floating

i began patting 
my dogs head
feeling so lonely
loosing myself 
inside the mind
just gave the dog
a great big hug

sweet sadness
carried on a fresh breeze
feeling the yawning 
in the silence of beauty
sweeping inside
holding out the key
standing thinking 
of one beautiful rose
blushing angels
sparkling thoughts

sharing spring time
sheep lambing
listening to the bleats
of the baby lambs
my eyes they spot
a bunch of primroses
plucking one 
gently putting 
it to my nose 

pictures flashed 
in this mind
i began smiling 
looking at such love
a dream in the soft 
gentle fragrance
scenting such beauty
floating spring breeze

tear drops fall
smiling deeply 
i never stop loving 
until the end
i deserve to be happy
listening to birds
softly singing a sweet song
blowing in
a mountain breeze

tasting spring 
floating upon air
oh how i await
that gentle dream beauty
who softy sweeps
over this ocean
on wings
of an angel

~ ~ ~ ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/5/2014 6:56:00 AM
Liam, As i started reading I thought "this poem has no punctuation". However, as I read it became clear this is how the mind thinks, in spurts and quick short sentences. Once I slid into the rhythm of the poem, the rhythm of the thoughts, it flowed as thoughts so often do. Nicely written.
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