Notes About The Poem

Written 9 Jun 2025 for Your Choice W Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

Lost in the Woods Hiku 28


                              Lost in the Woods Hiku 28


      lost in the woods at night

                 harsh croaks of crows on site~

                            knells of bells off-site.


        weird whines of ravens

                     smitten with dreadful fright~

                               seeking fastest flight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Rodrigues Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Congrats! Those night birds…
Guptar Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 11:57 AM
Thanks a lot poet friend. Wishing you a cheerful smiling day.
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 11:01 PM
Congrats in Brian's contest. Way to go
Guptar Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 11:55 AM
Thanks for your kind wishes and comments which are well taken. Cheers.
Jones Avatar
June 9, 2025 at 3:24 PM
Nice writing! Good luck in the contest!
Guptar Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Karen for appreciating the write an your kind wishes. Cheers.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace