Lost In the Woods

When lost in the woods
one wanders lugubriously directionless
in the weeds vines and branches
obstructing the altogether magnificent world
that abounds and surrounds
the muddled mind of the soul-filled seeker:

Truth traveler and mystical unraveller
plodding ahead confused in dread
of what lies beyond
the not-so-distant tree line
drifting dreamlike in a cloud
of misty-eyed fog looming in the air
just over there next to nowhere
like a serpent ready to strike...

Where forward momentum becomes a battle
against God Gravity and Nature as One
finds fear inviting and darkness enticing
as shadows on the moon walking
freely as a butterfly wafting
into a new dimension in space-time
before discerning the profundity of the scene
as nothing more than the ageless
Mad Magician whispering dismally sweet nothings
into the minds and ears of all good people
throughout our tear-filled years...

("Follow me," says he, "to the tasty apple on the tree.")

Until the soul seeking, scintillating Sun-Light appears
awakening the dumbfounded lost in the woodlands
to an inviting winding path leading toward
higher elevations in the farthest reaches
yearnings and palpitations of the universe
and the unfathomable intangible that binds
and sustains all matter and life reverberating
in every heartbeat and breath of fresh air in-spired
for the searching of the perennial 
everlasting and Wholly desired:

Love-Beauty-Truth-Freedom-Forgiveness-Grace
and all that we long for and imagine to be Good
at the end of the long winding path
through weeds vines and branches
when lost in the woods.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 9/16/2022 4:56:00 PM
At times I think we all need to feel lost a little to find the Love, mercy, forgiveness, and guidance of our Creator. We are here by God's grace to experience life as humans with free will. Live fully and be thankful for everything ... it's all good to anyone that knows, as Paul Harvey used to say, "the rest of the story". Have a great weekend, my friend! Bill
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Date: 9/8/2022 12:17:00 AM
Wow Terry. Excellent Poetry by you. You captured the emotions of a lost individual and used excellent metaphors that convey so much more in finding the answers. Remarkable Poetry by you Terry a favorite my friend...
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Terrell Martin
Date: 9/16/2022 8:55:00 AM
Hi Michael, thank you again and apologies for the long wait but I've been having computer issues and finally getting back up to speed. Glad you approve of Lost in the Woods and hope to see mor of you soon. Cheers, Terry
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