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Lost in Sorrow

The last rays of sunshine disappear as the dark clouds interweave, The show ends, and the crowd leaves, Left behind were dashed hopes and unfulfilled dreams scattered on the ground, Next to the exit door was this unfulfilled dream, unwrapped and unbound. An unchivalrous Knight abandons his Lady Love, breaking his promise, severing their bond, Searching high and low, he was nowhere to be seen and nowhere to be found, He left behind a once cheerfully bright soul, like a Spring Blossom, in a sea of tears drifting far and wide. Her shattered heart helplessly looks on as memories slip like sand through fingers, And while feelings of betrayal and abandonment still lingers, In the garden of her heart where love once lived, silence blooms, Her body, painful and lifeless, cries out in agony from grief and sadness that looms. Seeking solace, she looks for a way to escape and a place to hide, Finding none, her heart cries silently knowing she must endure and muster the courage to take the next stride. By Zyrool

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 10/10/2024 5:03:00 PM
Hello Zyrool yes she is very sad. her heart is broken. she needs a good cry. in order to heal. Also to take the next steps to be brave. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/11/2024 10:13:00 AM
Hello Zyrool, Monday is my Thanksgiving Day celebration. I will not be on the site on Monday. i thought I would let you know. Your welcome. yes it is sad when a love does not end well. Thank you for the blessings my friend. Blessings to you. /Darlene/
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 10/11/2024 2:20:00 AM
Hello Darlene, thank you for the read. It’s sad when love doesn’t end well. I hope she did take that stride. Sending Blessings your way and wishing you a fabulous weekend, my dear friend. Love and hugs.
Date: 10/10/2024 1:01:00 PM
Sad and emotive, making me think you have experienced this cruel side of love. Well done, Zyrool.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 10/10/2024 1:35:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Andrea. I actually witnessed a couple at a concert breaking up, and thought I could write about it.. Have a wonderful day, friend. Stay Blessed
Date: 10/8/2024 6:43:00 PM
How sad when love dies and we have to survive on our own, this poem makes me realize the value of eternal love and all its great power on earth.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 10/8/2024 11:03:00 PM
Thank you for the read, Rose. I agree it’s sad, but it’s better than never having been loved. Love your poems, I been reading them. Sending Blessings your way my friend. Enjoy the rest of the week .
Date: 10/8/2024 11:32:00 AM
I like this emotional poem with a bright conclusion that Lady Love will pick herself up and move on. And the Knight? I'm in suspense to what happens ? And suspense is a good way to energize the brain. Thank you for this exciting poem.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 10/8/2024 10:57:00 PM
Thank you for your beautiful comment, Hilda. It means a lot to me. I happen to witness this at a musical event, two strangers. Sending Blessings your way, have a great rest of the week, my friend.

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