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Fragments, and crumbs of life, all the little pieces." by John Ruskin, 1853 ____________________ your dark fathomless eyes and that deep melodic voice were magic for my soul oh. those lovely walks along the beach talking about whatever resting in our special place where we lay beneath a weeping willow tree for hours with a perfect blue azure sky over us and a gentle breeze caressing our skin oh, this is a memory beautiful a fragment, a crumb of life then, you kissed my waiting lips whispering sweet words and we were lost in our love lulled by singing birds and like vines twining, growing together so did our love . . . oh, I wish I could freeze time for today . . . I weep at your tomb _________________________ August 24, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/lost in our love Copyright Protected, ID 20-1281-035-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (27) sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 8/29/2020 11:49:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Constance! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/1/2020 5:52:00 PM
Kim, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 8/28/2020 12:13:00 PM
Constance - congratulations on your win - "lulled by singing birds, and like vines twining, growing together, so did our love" - Beautiful David
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Date: 9/1/2020 5:52:00 PM
David, thanks for the congratulations and the nice comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 8/28/2020 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story and what a picture to go with it. I did not see your line, "I weep at your tomb" coming. Enjoy your win and day.............
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Date: 9/1/2020 5:53:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 8/28/2020 5:53:00 AM
An vivid evocation of memory and loss. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/1/2020 5:53:00 PM
DW, thanks so much for the comment and the congrats _Constance
Date: 8/27/2020 12:44:00 PM
So melancholy and pensive, Constance, with beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 9/1/2020 5:54:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 8/27/2020 12:28:00 PM
I very poignant write Constance. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/1/2020 5:54:00 PM
Gary, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 8/25/2020 7:45:00 PM
Awesome example, Constance, good luck in Brian’s contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/26/2020 9:26:00 AM
Eve, thanks so much for the awesome and the hugs _Constance
Date: 8/25/2020 3:13:00 PM
I weep at your tomb! Very nice. Good example! Shall try!
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Date: 8/26/2020 9:27:00 AM
Krish, thanks for the compliment, remember it only has to be sad if you want it to be, it could be happy also _Constance
Date: 8/25/2020 7:02:00 AM
Exquisitely rendered beauty of a poem, Constance:-) Thanks for the example for your contest!
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Date: 8/26/2020 9:27:00 AM
Edward, thanks for the compliment _Constance

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