Andrea Dietrich Poet Acrostic

Lost In Love

L uscious lips that slightly part reveal to my delight
O ne gorgeous smile meant just for me and teeth that sparkle white.
S heepishly I drop my eyes, afraid that he might guess
T he sudden urge that sweeps my soul to feel his sweet caress. 

I nfatuation some might say! But I can only sigh. . . 
N ever have I felt this way for any other guy.

L ong-lashed luminescent eyes are those of hazel hue
O bserving me!  What soulful eyes I’m looking back into!
V anquished by his gaze am I. My forecast may sound grim. . . 
E vermore I’m lost because my heart is lost to him!

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Casarah Nance August 29, 2014 at 9:11 PM Wowee lady this is amazing! I love the way it feels to read it, such a lovely love! Brings a big smile to my face, so glad this was first place! :)

Dr.Ram Mehta August 29, 2014 at 6:20 AM Nice romantic write, Andrea. congrats

Teddy Kimathi August 29, 2014 at 3:11 AM A very beautiful poem Andrea! I was lost too in your work!!! ^_^ <3

Regina Mcintosh August 29, 2014 at 1:03 AM I love it :) Just awesome. Love and prayers, Gina

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 29, 2014 at 1:01 AM Wow that's purely wonderful my friend Andrea! Congrats on top win!

Matt Hunt August 18, 2012 at 2:35 AM This is wonderful!!! Great job:D

James Tate August 10, 2012 at 4:37 PM Andrea, you have real talent expressed poetically. Keep up the good work.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2012 at 6:37 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Lost" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 9, 2012 at 9:27 PM I'm swept away by this romantic write, Andrea! Completely lost...congrats, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A August 9, 2012 at 8:55 PM andrea.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD

Gwendolen Song August 9, 2012 at 7:14 PM Puppy love!!!! Ahhhh...this is soooo fun! Congrats dearie....u wrote of a great moment! gwendolen

Joyce Johnson August 8, 2012 at 2:18 PM Yes, I seem to remember this feeling so well expressed by you. Congratulations on a great poem and win, Andrea. Love, Joyce

Lee Ramage August 8, 2012 at 1:13 PM Yep felt that way once about 30 years ago. Well done, congratulations on your win. Lee

Modupe Sefunmi August 8, 2012 at 12:56 PM congrats on your win

Erich Goller August 8, 2012 at 12:06 PM Congratulations on your win, that's a lovely poem with an romantic touch. I enjoyed reading it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Black Eyed Susan August 8, 2012 at 10:08 AM congratulations on your win in my contest! a creative idea - loved it :)

Joseph May August 8, 2012 at 7:39 AM congrats on your win Andrea

Joseph May August 7, 2012 at 9:18 PM beautiful...a winner all the way...thanks for stopping by ....love...Joseph

Robert Johnson August 6, 2012 at 8:44 PM Drunk and stumbling in an amorous haze. She gladly roams in her glorious daze. Awaiting her next taste of honey. That you just can't buy with all the worlds money.

Joann Grisetti August 6, 2012 at 7:12 PM I remember this feeling. Great job. Best of luck.

Justin Bordner August 6, 2012 at 5:16 PM Beautiful Andrea - I can think of worse things to be lost in; thank Deity for love,thank Deity for you! J.A.B.

Matthew Anish August 6, 2012 at 2:54 PM Clever acrostic! Good luck in the contest and once more congratulations on winning the "Soup"contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jack Horne August 6, 2012 at 9:35 AM awww, what a sweet write, my friend - I hope you let Joe see this one (guaranteed to put a smile on his face)

Modupe Sefunmi August 6, 2012 at 8:15 AM Beautiful piece you have got here Andrea!

Harry Horsman August 6, 2012 at 5:53 AM truly a beautiful poem, remember i keep looking in especialy to see you,

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