Lost In His Thoughts

A beautiful heart coupled with a beautiful mind
I can get lost within his words and lose all  track of time

Journeying through his mind, I found my self
Pouring out my secrets until I have no more left

Their between the paper and the tip of his pen
He clings expression from beginning to end..

No boundaries, no walls, no empty spaces
Invading  imaginations, exploring private places

Lost within his thoughts.  I never want to escape
And his wisdom covers me, with a subtle embrace.

He allows me comfort, a place of solitude
 I find peace within his poetry, and flee the multitude

What we share surpasses our flesh, it's a  mental connection
He is the mirror of my mind, my words are his reflection

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/28/2012 3:22:00 PM
That's a beautiful way to describe closeness that comes around and sometimes stays. Ok this is my last read of yours today lol. Have a nice weekend. Hugs Michael
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Date: 4/18/2012 7:12:00 AM
Good poem, very well written! - Thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:08:00 AM
hmmm wonder who this could be?
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Date: 4/11/2012 2:27:00 AM
Wow, I'm really jealous because I would never be able to write like this. Excellent poetry poetress.
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Date: 4/5/2012 8:43:00 AM
glad u are back. i was lookin' for ya Shawdee!!! -------------------------He clings expression from beginning to end.. what a line GirlFreeeeHEEEND! what a dang poem! Period. the Dom-dattah! nuff said.
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Date: 4/4/2012 12:36:00 AM
well done Chiquita i really enjoyed reading this beautiful poem of yours
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