Winged Warrior Poet Monorhyme

Lost In a Thought

Lost In a Thought

Who am I...a tossed thought left to ramously rot in a sea of insanity?
What am I...a wondering wave a shackled slave a  crumb of humanity?
Where am I... drowning in a whirlpool a salivating drool of organity?
Why am I...amidst the stars with battle scars in a universe of infinity?

Like a restless rust a defenseless dust futilely falling inside my being
A life unjust a windless gust perpetually lost within thoughts of fleeing
A wounded wreck unknown a depleted drone unadorned and unseeing
A cataclysmal clone in this realm I’m thrown my thoughts are bleeding

Watching the hands of time a mindless mime of the words unspoken
I am an endless evolving enzyme in a parasitic paradigm of the broken
Losing grip of reality a frantic flee adrift within the obstreperous ocean
Lost in a lost a condemned cost of evaporating memories of emotion.




Sept.29.2017
Lost
Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi

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Brian Davey October 26, 2017 at 7:14 PM Makes you get lost in deep thought, congrats on your first place win

Sandra Haight October 26, 2017 at 4:38 PM ^WW^ congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win in the contest, for this outstanding poem. Sandra

Agnes Krampe October 25, 2017 at 5:59 PM Congrats on your top win, ^WW^. Love the internal rhyme!

Curtis Johnson October 25, 2017 at 12:10 PM Much talent here. Congrats.

John Hamilton October 25, 2017 at 12:04 PM Congrats WW, first place in a premium contest hosted by Debbie Guzzi, maybe you don't know what you just accomplished, but this is a testament to your poetic skill and ability. Knew this was a winner!

Richard Lamoureux October 25, 2017 at 11:51 AM Outstanding, congrats on top win.

Charlie Smith October 25, 2017 at 8:31 AM Loved the rhyme in a rhyme. Deep work WW, terrific job, congratulations...

Eve Roper October 24, 2017 at 7:58 PM Excellent write, ^WW^, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Arturo Michael October 1, 2017 at 5:26 AM I like your writing style...the way you put your thoughts together...Soaring above them...Have a nice Sunday...A big hug

John Hamilton September 29, 2017 at 10:32 PM You are in your own league with your rhymes WW, a very thoughtful and introspective piece, enjoyed thoroughly!

Nette Onclaud September 29, 2017 at 2:54 PM WW, deep pondering so well done.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2017 at 12:20 PM - Excellent poem ... lost in your deep thought W.W. - GL in the contest ! - Greeting // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One September 29, 2017 at 8:52 AM Very very deep... an insight into your mind or is it fictional?

Maria Williams September 29, 2017 at 7:27 AM Not much I can say except that this is an Awesome Write and a Winner in my eyes, WW. The music compliments perfectly. I really don't know how you do it my friend, such a unique style.....Maria

Kim Rodrigues September 29, 2017 at 7:08 AM Love it, WW! Especially your opening lines! Great turmoil tossed about in this one! GL in contest!

Joanna Daniel September 29, 2017 at 7:06 AM Excellent poetry, WW, sometimes, I envy you, just that wee bit, you know;)

Vijay Pandit September 29, 2017 at 6:14 AM Like the way the poem starts with so many apt questions--and delivers on the promise of the theme--best for a win WW!

Russell Sivey September 29, 2017 at 4:24 AM Wow, this is incredible WW! You have amazed me by this wondrous write my friend! Your rhyming skill is second to none! I am quite impressed by your talent in writing a poem of this caliber! You have delighted me by your writing splendor! What a grand piece, Great Work!!