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Lost In a Thought Premiere Contest Winner

Lost In a Thought Who am I...a tossed thought left to ramously rot in a sea of insanity? What am I...a wondering wave a shackled slave a crumb of humanity? Where am I... drowning in a whirlpool a salivating drool of organity? Why am I...amidst the stars with battle scars in a universe of infinity? Like a restless rust a defenseless dust futilely falling inside my being A life unjust a windless gust perpetually lost within thoughts of fleeing A wounded wreck unknown a depleted drone unadorned and unseeing A cataclysmal clone in this realm I’m thrown my thoughts are bleeding Watching the hands of time a mindless mime of the words unspoken I am an endless evolving enzyme in a parasitic paradigm of the broken Losing grip of reality a frantic flee adrift within the obstreperous ocean Lost in a lost a condemned cost of evaporating memories of emotion. Sept.29.2017 Lost Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 10/26/2017 7:14:00 PM
Makes you get lost in deep thought, congrats on your first place win
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Date: 10/26/2017 4:38:00 PM
^WW^ congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win in the contest, for this outstanding poem. Sandra
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Date: 10/25/2017 5:59:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, ^WW^. Love the internal rhyme!
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Date: 10/25/2017 12:10:00 PM
Much talent here. Congrats.
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Date: 10/25/2017 12:04:00 PM
Congrats WW, first place in a premium contest hosted by Debbie Guzzi, maybe you don't know what you just accomplished, but this is a testament to your poetic skill and ability. Knew this was a winner!
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Date: 10/25/2017 11:51:00 AM
Outstanding, congrats on top win.
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Date: 10/25/2017 8:31:00 AM
Loved the rhyme in a rhyme. Deep work WW, terrific job, congratulations...
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Date: 10/24/2017 7:58:00 PM
Excellent write, ^WW^, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 10/1/2017 5:26:00 AM
I like your writing style...the way you put your thoughts together...Soaring above them...Have a nice Sunday...A big hug
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Date: 9/29/2017 10:32:00 PM
You are in your own league with your rhymes WW, a very thoughtful and introspective piece, enjoyed thoroughly!
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Date: 9/29/2017 2:54:00 PM
WW, deep pondering so well done.. huggs
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Date: 9/29/2017 12:20:00 PM
- Excellent poem ... lost in your deep thought W.W. - GL in the contest ! - Greeting // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2017 8:52:00 AM
Very very deep... an insight into your mind or is it fictional?
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Date: 9/29/2017 7:27:00 AM
Not much I can say except that this is an Awesome Write and a Winner in my eyes, WW. The music compliments perfectly. I really don't know how you do it my friend, such a unique style.....Maria
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Date: 9/29/2017 7:08:00 AM
Love it, WW! Especially your opening lines! Great turmoil tossed about in this one! GL in contest!
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Date: 9/29/2017 7:06:00 AM
Excellent poetry, WW, sometimes, I envy you, just that wee bit, you know;)
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Date: 9/29/2017 6:14:00 AM
Like the way the poem starts with so many apt questions--and delivers on the promise of the theme--best for a win WW!
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Date: 9/29/2017 4:24:00 AM
Wow, this is incredible WW! You have amazed me by this wondrous write my friend! Your rhyming skill is second to none! I am quite impressed by your talent in writing a poem of this caliber! You have delighted me by your writing splendor! What a grand piece, Great Work!!
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