Lost In a Shadow of Time

Her eyes appear brighter
Her voice whispers low
Her head on the pillow has risen, somehow
She is somewhere without us, somewhere back home 
Lost from the present, to a place long ago
She's been lost in the shadows,.......... of where? 

We don't know… 

A spark has ignited to cradle this moment
Exquisitely composed with infinite detail.
From the essence of recall, it seems to become
a virtual illusion, as if she's gone home

Once lost in the darkness,
it is briefly retrieved,
just for this moment, before it is gone.

She smiles as she holds it,
as if it has pleased her,
a small golden flashback
to fondle awhile.

It came from a closet,
like a small shaft of light,
on a small mote of dust that has tumbled in flight

Poised in the sunlight it cradles the moment
Too brittle and fragile, too soon it is fading
And quickly to vanish, it falls out of sight
No trace and her face, will lose all the light
crawling into the shadows
that cradle the night

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5/9/18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/1/2018 4:17:00 AM
OMG is this superb Carrie! I hope John can appreciate how wonderful this truly is. I wish I could write this well Carrie. You inspire me!. Hugs, Connie xxoo ; )
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Date: 5/28/2018 11:03:00 PM
Oh, I love this, Carrie - so full of creativity and exquisite phrasing ... love the flow and darkly-tinged imagery, and it took me to a place of introspection almost instantly. I enjoy being "snagged" by words in unexpected ways, and your work often does that. Wonderful! :-) <3
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/29/2018 8:10:00 PM
Thank you Gregory, for the generous comment! So nice to get such positive feedback !
Date: 5/19/2018 9:26:00 PM
Lovely, Carrie. Congrats on your win. I FAVE'd this poem, only partly because I can so relate with my sipping memory capacity. Superbly written.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/29/2018 8:12:00 PM
I truly appreciate your kind words Line! We all feel like our minds slip a little..., this one was based on a grandmother's memory lapse, that would often be sparked just for a moment, ....then gone in a flash
Date: 5/19/2018 3:18:00 PM
By far this is excellent. #1 to me. A fave. Carrie, you have written something so special that a lot of us have witnessed but would not know how to put into words. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/29/2018 8:13:00 PM
You are so kind to check on my poetry, Susan! thanks so much!
Date: 5/18/2018 6:24:00 PM
Carrie, this one hit home as I have an older brother in the throes of Alzheimer's. A very heartfelt and poignant write. Thanks for entering the contest
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/19/2018 3:13:00 PM
I am so honored to make your list, John, however very sorry to know you felt this poem so close to home. Many of us have experienced this sad illness in one way or another. I am sorry to know you have someone you care about going through the shadow of Alzheimer's.
Date: 5/10/2018 5:47:00 PM
This gave me goosebumps, Carrie. I was in the presence of this miraculous breakthrough occurring not too long ago at a hospital bedside. How wonderfully you have captured this in your amazing poem. All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/19/2018 3:14:00 PM
It is an honor to hear from you, but also that you understood what I was telling in my poem. Thank you Sandra
Date: 5/9/2018 7:53:00 PM
Wow Carrie, this is a winner, for a contest or no contest, this is a stunner, well done!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/19/2018 3:14:00 PM
Thank you so much John, for such a kind comment !
Date: 5/9/2018 6:12:00 PM
Your poem took me to a different place of dreams and and shadows, Carrie! Written with a masterful, exquisite touch! Excellent :)
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Carrie Richards
Date: 5/9/2018 7:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely comment, Laura :)
Date: 5/9/2018 11:38:00 AM
well done Carrie, your poem has inspired me as I was having a problem with this contest...good luck
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Date: 5/9/2018 7:41:00 PM
I just had a chance to read yours, Frederic! You nailed it with such a lovely interpretation of the contest :)
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