Lost Freedom

I see a person climbing 
on a desolate cliff 
above the clouds 

Sees the world 
and laughs in 
the heppines of height 

He says he will 
experience death 
without misery for happiness  

He do not know 
what await him 
when he returns to the ground 

To live alone in sorrow 
with the true truth 
of this world 

To be free in a freedom 
thet he did not get 
but he just met 
the emptiness of a man
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July 29, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Lots to make readers think ... QUESTION: If we accept our pain, lack of happiness on earth, does it open up unexpected doors/windows to other places/realms? shalom, shalom/Paz/Pace/Joy of Jesus!
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