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Lost Cocoon

The needle popped the balloon
  
  ~ Hope lost her cocoon

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Marikate Kingston

August 21, 2021 at 7:37 PM

Very nice metaphor. I really like it Gershon. We named my daughter Hope, because during delivery we almost lost her. Hope and prayers were all we had, she was finally born Hope Kingston for all the hope it took to get her here. She came out of her cocoon, thanks to the big guy up above. I'm glad I found your poem.

Gershon Wolf

August 22, 2021 at 12:46 PM

Wow. Thanks for letting me know, Marikate. Never imagined that these two lines could ge so personal when I submitted them. Life is full of surprises, and I'm sure glad that Hope Kingston has been one of the good ones! Hugs, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

August 20, 2021 at 12:51 PM

Very perceptive, hope can be a fragile thing~

Rico Leffanta

August 20, 2021 at 11:40 AM

A little prick seems to change the world . . ..

Gershon Wolf

August 20, 2021 at 3:46 PM

That's a pretty sharp comment there, Rico! Aloha

Jennifer Proxenos

August 20, 2021 at 10:31 AM

Such a shame! Hugs, blessings Gershon. Well if Mohamed won't come to the mountain, guess the mountain has to come to Mohamed - missed your wise comments. Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

August 19, 2021 at 7:42 PM

Aww!

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