John Lawless Poet Monoku

Lost at Sea

A ship in a bottle
                    …..Becalmed
                                    …..Left the cap off
                                                            ….The crew went AWOL

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Paula Goldsmith July 22, 2024 at 11:34 AM I enjoyed reading your creative/fun Monoku write. Thanks for the laugh. I needed it... Part 2, will they get back before sunrise??? Have a fun day writing away....................

Lin Lane July 22, 2024 at 3:52 AM Tinier than Lilliputians! I'm glad they were rescued. I wonder where they ended up.

Arlo Parker July 21, 2024 at 8:58 PM ha, ha, ha....cute!

Gershon Wolf July 21, 2024 at 5:59 PM Good humor, John!