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Lost All Sense

I gave you everything I had All of me I held nothing back I believed You were a man of integrity But you were less than honest You broke every single promise You made me. I've lost all sense I just can't perceive How you could use me And just leave I'm blind to the sight Of your face I'm numb to the feel Of your embrace I try to breathe you in But there's no trace I'm deaf to you No matter how loud I've lost the taste Of your kiss on my mouth Ever since you walked out I've lost all sense I thought you were someone else So I didn't ask Then you revealed What was behind your mask I saw the horrifying Real you at last It made my mind go crazy I can't look Don't make me You left me nothing. I've lost all sense I just can't perceive How you could use me And just leave I'm blind to the sight Of your face I'm numb to the feel Of your embrace I try to breathe you in But there's no trace I'm deaf to you No matter how loud I've lost the taste Of your kiss on my mouth Ever since you walked out I've lost all sense I stare out the window Seeing nothing Just open wide as you Push the spoon at me Then there's a moment Of pure clarity How'd you get inside my hell? Just Leave me alone I promise I won't tell Then pull the veil. I've lost all sense I just can't perceive How you could use me And just leave I'm blind to the sight Of your face I'm numb to the feel Of your embrace I try to breathe you in But there's no trace I'm deaf to you No matter how loud I've lost the taste Of your kiss on my mouth Ever since you walked out I've lost all sense

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Date: 4/19/2025 4:58:00 PM
Quite a lyric Crys. I could actually see this as a Taylor Swift song (ugh. did I just say that?). Seriously though, great breakup song. I especially like the line, "I've lost the taste of your kiss out of my mouth." You would think all kisses would taste the same. Not
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/20/2025 8:50:00 AM
Lol... Taylor Swift is a pretty talented lady! Ty! I wrote this last year or maybe two now... it's a fav of mine the way it has double meaning. Thanks for reading! Xo
Date: 4/18/2025 8:59:00 AM
Well it goes to show, you'll never get it wrong (If you are a woman) lol)) I wont even try to Defend the men.'
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/24/2025 9:42:00 AM
Hahaha! >¿<
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/20/2025 1:48:00 PM
I agreed with my wife when she said I was the best!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 4/18/2025 1:11:00 PM
Lol...I love writing somewhat creepy lyrics... and men can be right sometimes! When they agree with a woman for instance..lol!;) xo

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