Lost

Feeling cold,
Lost in desperation,
Remembering sadness,
Getting in frustration...

Trying to let go,
Comprehended,
By few of those.

Losing comprehension,
Restrained from myself,
Being criticized,
Feeling hollowed.

Needing help,
To bring me,
Back to life...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 24, 2013 at 6:55 AM
You are on the right path, Ruben! Nice work! Jimbo
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