Lost

Do you remember the day we met. 
I knew right then we'd be together forever.

Do you remember our wedding day.
You floated towards me like an ivory angel.

Do you remember the children being born.
Small bundles of arms and legs, making our lives complete.

Do you remember our first grandchild.
Precious like our own but less responsibility.

Do you remember our retirement holiday.
Warm beaches and blue skies, just the two of us at last.

Do you remember the first time you didn't come home.
I searched and searched and found you lost and scared.

Do you remember the kind doctors at the hospital telling you not to worry.
You had me to take care of you.

Do you remember waking in the middle of the night.
Thinking there was a stranger next to you.

Do you remember my name.

Do you remember me.

Do you remember.

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Date: 2/25/2013 5:03:00 PM
Lola' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT
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Date: 1/20/2013 3:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Sorry this is late. I just figured out how to see the other entries. I'm new here.
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Date: 1/21/2013 4:06:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Lola.
Date: 1/19/2013 6:33:00 AM
sorry i am late with congratulations Lola xx
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Date: 1/19/2013 5:10:00 PM
Thank you very much. Lola.
Date: 1/15/2013 10:16:00 PM
wow, what a strong poem. this is outstanding. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/16/2013 3:56:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Lola.
Date: 1/15/2013 6:59:00 PM
oh my great words... Congrats...Seren
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Date: 1/16/2013 3:56:00 AM
Thanks very much.
Date: 1/15/2013 5:28:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/16/2013 3:55:00 AM
Thank you. Lola.
Date: 1/15/2013 8:20:00 AM
Lola~ congratulations with the wonderful win in Frank's ""DO YOU REMEMBER? " contest. have yourself a nice day~ xox~PD
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Date: 1/15/2013 1:30:00 PM
Thanks very much. Lola.
Date: 1/15/2013 7:10:00 AM
This is heart-wrenching. Rarely does a poem give me goosebumps, but this one did. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/15/2013 1:30:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. Lola.
Date: 1/9/2013 8:17:00 PM
Lola, wow... this is not the way your loved one is suppose to make you feel. I like this poem... and feeling lost makes me forget it all... always~pd
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Date: 1/10/2013 1:52:00 AM
As always thanks for your comment. Happy New Year.
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