Lost

You've been gone for a while, I needed you with me. Where have u been? Was I too much??? Have I lost u for good? I've found myself up through the night, Unable to find that piece of u that calms! So I wander, To no where!!! Stuck in between subliminal lines.... Was I too much??? Have I lost u for good? Seeing only in shades of life, And none of it is quite what it seems Everything confuses me, Only with you, Is it clarity. WAS I TOO MUCH??? HAVE I LOST U FOR GOOD? In a world of insanity,phasing in and out of reality... Every morning my pores start to tear, Nervously awaiting and hoping you would come back to me... At the break of sanity I no longer ask? Was I too much. Excepting that my pressures are yours .... When the weight becomes too heavy Poof your GONE!!! Dreadfully realizing that without YOU, I am nothing...... The one thing I can't bear to lose!!!! MY MIND!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week KIBI. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 1:14 PM
creative and nicely worded piece, Kibi
Sweetheart Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 7:22 AM
More like Free Verse Kibi.. this is the way I would form it... my friend.. if it does not rhyme or have short lines like Haiku or Senryu .. u are safe with Free Verse luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 6:56 AM
Was I too much? Wow Kibi this is an amazing creative write my friend.. hope u have been well.. the famous question everyone asks .. as it seems we can be too much for some guys and they cannot handle real luv... can so relate.. very expressive .. wishing u a most blessed and Happy Easter celebration luv..
Broomhall Avatar
April 20, 2011 at 6:40 AM
Haha I lose my mind at lease once a day(: Nice poem!
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