Susann Riedel Poet Free verse

Lost

sun is shining but tears in my eyes

clouds are smiling and wave me goodbye

rain is falling down on earth

im asking myself 'why does it hurts'

wind is blowing around my ears

i'm asking myself 'why am i here?'

sun, clouds, rain and wind they all become my closest friend ?

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 23, 2011 at 12:39 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing.. check out our contests too.. good luck with luv..

Poet Destroyer A January 23, 2011 at 11:57 AM lovely write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.

James Fraser January 23, 2011 at 11:53 AM From the earth we have come, and to the earth we will go. To witness the sun, clouds rain and winds, my what a show. Nice one Susann....:)

Steven Henderson January 23, 2011 at 11:20 AM Beautiful. Thank you for sharing! Steve