Lost

At the computer
I decided to compose
The verse was quickly
And very accurately closed

When I pressed the
Submit tab the program
Back to login tab goes
My beautiful work going, going, goes

Tears, tears, tears flow


( I have learned this lesson several times and the poetry never ever comes 
exactly back to my mind ...it is lost forever in cyberspace floating around. I say 
over and over always write it down, write it down.)
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Trevino Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 5:17 PM
it happens... i carry a little notebook everywhere i go because i always have things coming to mind and i try to jot them down before i forgett Royal T.
Chachere Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 2:49 PM
Happens to all of us. true poem, i like it. -Always&Forever Lynette
Strand Avatar
February 24, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Yes Sara that's the way senior moments are we me.thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
Nunn Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 8:05 PM
Been there done that, such a bummer,good write Thanks on Delores yes a lot of evil females, but she is the top..Thanks Danny
Beam Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 5:41 PM
thanks for congrats im glad not alone losing poems and we given so many words words not spaces with love
A  Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 1:27 PM
I actualy feel the same way to.I can never think of the same thing twice..It always seems when I have the best thoughts .I never have a pen or paper..I lose my good wanna be poem alot . Enjoyed reading your poem . your friend IRMA.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 12:10 PM
Excellent ..describes what I and many others have to contend with on this site.. I don't know what causes that ..once u login u should be able to be on as long as u want but right in the middle it does exactly what u wrote about today... Excellent... new trick: I have copy books and pens in every room now... so if a thought comes to me I don't have to run around or go up and down to my computer and desk area... good idea? luv.. and thankxxx .. Linda-Marie..
Dvorkis Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 11:07 AM
I can relate. In my case the poem was alive and well until Poetry soup decided my language was too foul for their taste and deleted it forever and ever. I honestly can't remember more than a few scattered lines here and there. Definitely should back up your material on your hard drive.
Smith Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 9:12 AM
Hi, I like how your words flow, and the meaning of the poem. keep it flowing! ~ D. Smith
Taylor Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 7:37 AM
Thanks. I thought I was the only one with this problem! Now I don't feel so neardy! Thanks again.
Culverhouse Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 6:01 AM
funny one, yep that has been happening alot lately, I try to either write then or type them. before I put them into pS. another thing I found if it is a new poem. do the highlight the poem and copy it (crontrol c) justin case it gets erased, if you can remember to do it.
Palli Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 5:35 AM
So frustrating!
Beaufort Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 4:07 AM
The software isn't perfect--its most human quality. You are very talented, and this is cute. Thanks for your comment, but sad for your loss. It is very difficult for me to compose long poems, so I try to be short and to the point. We are all so different in expression though similar at heart. The experience of life has much commonality. That is why I really love your work.
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