Lost

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I lost my beautiful dog today I lost my dearest friend She took with her a piece of my heart I’ll never feel again I know you’ll say there will come a day when your heart is filled with another but you didn’t know my Chuli girl A dog unlike any other I’ve never cried or felt inside the way I felt with her saying goodbye as I watched her die and nuzzled my face in her fur Now I’m back home I feel so alone The silence is filled with tears I miss her so You’ll never know She was part of my very best years

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Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Date: 5/26/2025 3:47:00 PM

Oh Ms. Jeanie, I never had a dog only stuff toys lol. If u want I can be your friend if you're okay with having a disabled with paralyzed left arm that walks with a cane friend. I'm a Filipino-American been in America for 30 years or so. I am a Catholic or Roman Catholic and I'm looking for an Editor who can edit my book. FATHER CHRIST DIVINE TRUTH-Companion Prayers. I hope u visit my poetry soup poem hp and maybe comment on some if u want.