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Loss of Life

Loss of life...... When the faith is lost in the heaven, the peace will become an enemy in our soul When the love is lost in our heart, the nature of behavior become full of sins When the knowledge is lost in the school, the nation's future will suffer from wisdom When the kindness is lost in the nation, the people of the nation become immoral When a home is lost its brightness of life, the family will suffer from mantle agony When the nature is lost its beauty, the pleasant green pastures become like a dessert land When all those prayers are kept away from God the tears of life can not be cured Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2015 - Ravi Satahsivam

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/3/2015 11:41:00 AM

I truly love this one, I hope kindness stays in our nation

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/1/2015 4:00:00 AM

Ravi you always write with wisdom.. =') keep it up..~Olive Eloisa =')

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/26/2015 8:56:00 PM

Words of wisdom to be taken to heart... A nice write, Ravi!

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/30/2015 6:54:00 AM

Thanks for your comment my friend. Appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2015 5:42:00 AM

- A really wonderful poem, my friend Ravi - I'm here, but only short moments at a time :) ...... before I have to run on ..... I do not have time this month to "soup" .. ... only a few poems every day, I'm glad I chose yours poem today :) - Best wishes from Norway :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/30/2015 6:56:00 AM

Thanks for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated. Love, hugs and kissesxxxxx

Len Gasun

Date: 8/21/2015 12:36:00 PM

Such a very beautiful, inspiring and uplifting poem this is my very dear friend, Ravi. I'm loving/embracing this so much and keeping it in my treasure-fave box if you don't mind. Thank you so much for gracing my night with your amazing verse! I'm so blessed to read it. Thank you so much. Thank you so much as well for your kind visit on my poem. God bless you and your family. Huge Hugs! love lots, Leonora

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 8/23/2015 2:58:00 AM

Thank you very much for your lovely comment. Touched me lot. Appreciated my friend. Love, hugs and kissesxxxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/21/2015 9:45:00 AM

Just as when good poets stop writing about aspiring for all things good, drowned out by the noise of the dark...Good one, Ravi!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2015 3:52:00 PM

a thoughtful and spiritual poem, Ravi. thanks for visiting me today!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/20/2015 12:24:00 PM

Profound and provoking! Excellently done, dear Ravi. I liked it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2015 11:55:00 AM

Some truthful thoughts you have penned..I enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for dropping byl..Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 8/20/2015 9:55:00 AM

Your thoughts have been heavy I see on the well being of our people, nation, and world we all need to see what is going on. Ravi, a very good write thank you for opening our eyes. Hugs Eve