Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

Loss of Life

Loss of life......

When the faith is lost in the heaven,
the peace will become an enemy in our soul
When the love is lost in our heart,
the nature of behavior become full of sins
When the knowledge is lost in the school,
the nation's future will suffer from wisdom
When the kindness is lost in the nation,
the people of the nation become immoral
When a home is lost its brightness of life,
the family will suffer from mantle agony
When the nature is lost its beauty,
the pleasant green pastures become like a dessert land
When all those prayers are kept away from God
the tears of life can not be cured

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Poet Destroyer A September 3, 2015 at 11:41 AM I truly love this one, I hope kindness stays in our nation

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 1, 2015 at 4:00 AM Ravi you always write with wisdom.. =') keep it up..~Olive Eloisa =')

Kelly Deschler August 26, 2015 at 8:56 PM Words of wisdom to be taken to heart... A nice write, Ravi! Ravi Sathasivam August 30, 2015 at 6:54 AM Thanks for your comment my friend. Appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2015 at 5:42 AM - A really wonderful poem, my friend Ravi - I'm here, but only short moments at a time :) ...... before I have to run on ..... I do not have time this month to "soup" .. ... only a few poems every day, I'm glad I chose yours poem today :) - Best wishes from Norway :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam August 30, 2015 at 6:56 AM Thanks for your comment my dear friend. Appreciated. Love, hugs and kissesxxxxx

Len Gasun August 21, 2015 at 12:36 PM Such a very beautiful, inspiring and uplifting poem this is my very dear friend, Ravi. I'm loving/embracing this so much and keeping it in my treasure-fave box if you don't mind. Thank you so much for gracing my night with your amazing verse! I'm so blessed to read it. Thank you so much. Thank you so much as well for your kind visit on my poem. God bless you and your family. Huge Hugs! love lots, Leonora Ravi Sathasivam August 23, 2015 at 2:58 AM Thank you very much for your lovely comment. Touched me lot. Appreciated my friend. Love, hugs and kissesxxxx

Kp Nunez August 21, 2015 at 9:45 AM Just as when good poets stop writing about aspiring for all things good, drowned out by the noise of the dark...Good one, Ravi!

Andrea Dietrich August 20, 2015 at 3:52 PM a thoughtful and spiritual poem, Ravi. thanks for visiting me today!

Demetrios Trifiatis August 20, 2015 at 12:24 PM Profound and provoking! Excellently done, dear Ravi. I liked it.

Sara Kendrick August 20, 2015 at 11:55 AM Some truthful thoughts you have penned..I enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for dropping byl..Sara

Eve Roper August 20, 2015 at 9:55 AM Your thoughts have been heavy I see on the well being of our people, nation, and world we all need to see what is going on. Ravi, a very good write thank you for opening our eyes. Hugs Eve

Constance La France August 20, 2015 at 9:54 AM Ravi, I like the message within your words. A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, tangerine ...

Anu Nayak August 20, 2015 at 7:13 AM Nice poem penned well about ethics and moral values and faith ....ends on a sad note though Ravi...good one...love, Anu:-) Ravi Sathasivam August 20, 2015 at 7:52 AM Thanks for your comment Anulaxmi. Appreciated.

Jan Allison August 20, 2015 at 6:55 AM oh beautifully pennedwith such wise words but such a sad poem Ravi:-( hugs jan xx7 Ravi Sathasivam August 20, 2015 at 7:53 AM Thanks for your comment my dear friend Jan. Appreciated.