Loss of Innocence

Fragrant flower, Jasmine infused,

the evening breathes comic book laughter,

colors white and green and yellow.

Our heroes, our saviors in bold of

twilight blue and mud red ocher.

Perfume fingers stretch forth on evening breeze

searching for that champion 

only to find, beneath primary hues,

a miriad of diffuse pastel hides

beneath balloon exclamations,

our vain attempt to save us from ourselves.




04/22/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Neumann Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 2:29 AM
I like this. The message is clear and a tad mysterious at the same time. Many wishes, Kai
Inman Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 12:36 PM
Hi Kai, thanks for visiting and I appreciate the kind comment.
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 6:50 PM
James, I agree with your comment below. A remarkable poem here. I've added it to my favourites. It is very simple, but so much to read into this poem, that goes well beyond youth and comic books and heroes. L
Inman Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Another great comment Leanne, I'm not sure that I believe in heroes. We all make decisions, right or wrong, if there are heroes in this world, I think, perhaps, they are the ones who accept responsibility for the choices they make, right or wrong.
Rose  Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:48 PM
I can feel the colors as I read, Well done dear poet
Inman Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 12:49 AM
Thank you. We seem to always be looking for a hero to save us, when, perhaps we should be looking in the mirror.
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