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Loss, Love, and Life

Loneliness is now foreign, as self-destructive vest I once wore
Oblivious of monstrous foes as friends, I opened my doors
Summer, Fall, winter, Spring; pizzazz I knew was vaporized
To see me; who knew me, tears would well within your eyes.

Lost my sight, my sprite, my family who helped fueled my might
On bull dagger highways, byways, and beat down buildings, I lost rights
Somebody ought to tell somebody, please don't ever venture there
To think your world has come to an end, meant no roots to declare, but

Love does bloom in warmth; silence! stillness, such priceless gems
Overhead skylight oozes rain song that'll soothe your soul, and then...
Song becomes prayer sans shame; you'd weep, hoping to stay alive
They said I arrived looking lost; then soon became cute butterfly.

Lost in midnight dreams, with me in clothing I had already burned
Only waking redressed me from haunting, to new haven I was in
Someone ought to tell somebody, do seek and venture therein
Today I am lost; stepping through multiple mirrors of no harm.

Love will find you when you're lost; its sensors' deep in our heart
Out and about, I'll forever stay lost in endless maze of gratitude
Sunshine and rain, fire and ice, I'll lose myself to warm pool of recovery
Take away my pen, my sheets of white, my glasses; I'd lose me to recovery.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 11:46 AM
THis is passionate and sincere writing. Love your imagery here, Iris.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Thanks Andrea; gets to a point where sharing is part therapy.
Andresen Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:13 AM
- A wonderful poem (7) - your description is written with touching and beautiful words Iris, enjoy reading :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 7:58 AM
Thank U Anne. Lost I a in recovery.
A   Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 10:04 AM
Hi, Iris, I was hoping in reading a new one from you today ... if ever there is a poem you'd like me to read from you. Please guide and point the way .... I'm already a fan. Blessing. Linda
Trifiatis Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Love always illumines its ways for those who search her, easily her to find! Well written poem that explores the secrets of the heart, dear Iris!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 11:58 AM
This is a very deep and impressive work Iris, beautifully expressed. A poet's poem. #7
George   Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Very deep and profound, dear Iris. Much to ponder here. You display all the attributes of a great writer. Sincerely, Elaine George
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 2:39 AM
IRIS, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Thanks dear one.
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Iris, WOW, I love the end, they can take it all away, somewhere there you will have recovery. This is a well-captured gem (bio), the way you express love, and life when found, is the perfect. A seven Always ~LINDA~
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Thank you dear one.
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