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Loss for Eternity

in the distance i see you and i call you back; I WANT YOU BACK........ and you turn.... look at me with a split-second of for-EVER in your eyes then...as you are so good at doing you use that devil i don't care smile and disappear right there in the crystal swirling liquid of my tears there is a whispering... "i will wait.... yes, i will wait next time." by janetta

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Date: 2/5/2009 5:58:00 PM
Janetta - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/3/2009 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2009 8:56:00 PM
Congratulations on you lovely poetry being featured this week, God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing*Tyesha
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Date: 2/2/2009 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations Janetta on "Loss For Eternity" being featured htis week. Vince
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Date: 2/1/2009 7:15:00 PM
and disappear right there in the crystal swirling liquid of my tears Nicely expressed sadness. Very sensitive.
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Date: 2/1/2009 3:57:00 PM
Creative format conveys your thoughts in an interesting way. Congratulations on having your poem featured! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 2/1/2009 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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