Janetta Harrington Poet Free verse

Loss For Eternity

in the distance i see you
and i call you back;
I WANT YOU BACK........
and you turn....

look at me
with a split-second
of for-EVER in your eyes

then...as you are
so good at doing
you use that 
devil i don't care
smile

and disappear
right there
in the crystal
swirling liquid 
of my tears

there is a whispering...
"i will wait....
yes, i will wait
next time."

by janetta

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Michael Jordan February 5, 2009 at 5:58 PM Janetta - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Carol Sunshine Brown February 3, 2009 at 10:59 AM Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Tyesha Ehigiator February 2, 2009 at 8:56 PM Congratulations on you lovely poetry being featured this week, God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing*Tyesha

Vince Suzadail Jr. February 2, 2009 at 12:10 PM Congratulations Janetta on "Loss For Eternity" being featured htis week. Vince

Iolanda Scripca February 1, 2009 at 7:15 PM and disappear right there in the crystal swirling liquid of my tears Nicely expressed sadness. Very sensitive.

February 1, 2009 at 3:57 PM Creative format conveys your thoughts in an interesting way. Congratulations on having your poem featured! Keep on writing. Karen

Sharon Winter February 1, 2009 at 11:28 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar