Losing You

A violent death that I can see 
your body watches over me 
A silent cry is what you make 
before your life was taken away 
Lost 
Confused without you here 
I slowly start to feel the tears 
There is a beast inside me now 
so very angry 
so very foul 
Our friendship was so loyal and true 
living without you is to had to do 
I feel the pain and suffering 
as vastly blood runs through my veins 
so many ways to end my life 
to end my hardships 
and my strife 
losing you was my worst fear 
I only wish that you were here 
to make me laugh 
to make me smile 
just like you did when I was indenial 
dizziness is what I feel 
as visions start running through my head 
visions of you 
visions of me 
visions of us so happy and free 
the more visions I see 
the weaker I become 
I fall to my knees and know that darkness has come 
I lay down my head and begin to rest 
to never wake up is my only request 
I open my eyes to you holding me and I know 
my wish has come true!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005



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