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Losing My Marbles and Then Some

I scratched my head my brain fell out It ambled 'cross the table Stared at me most curiously, grinned ~ Then pronounced me disabled

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 7/15/2023 9:59:00 PM

I heard that only smart brains can 'amble' Tee hee...

Michael Tor

Date: 6/28/2023 7:26:00 PM

Ha ha love the ending... It made sense, ha ha..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/28/2023 6:25:00 PM

Ha! Ha! A FAVE for me, Gershon. No strain No brain Mine just fell Down the drain Met yours on its travels As our brains try to unravel Then it started to rain Washing our brains away again

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2023 7:17:00 PM

Sounds like marbles are rolling ALL over the place here, Shirley! What fun! Heh-heh, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2023 10:48:00 AM

LOL…wow!

J. Summers

Date: 6/28/2023 7:04:00 AM

At least when your brain fell out it “ambled” across the table. Mine just laid there and quivered slightly. John

J. Summers
Date: 6/28/2023 5:56:00 PM

Strawberry jelly!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2023 7:53:00 AM

Oooh. That gives me the old goosebumps, John. Did your brain look more like strawberry jelly, grape jam, or calves liver?! lol. Thanks for the smiles, Gershon

John Lawless

Date: 6/28/2023 4:46:00 AM

AH, but who makes best use of their marbles....he who has 100% of them and uses only 73% or he who has 73% and uses 100% if them???? "Marble on MacBeth, marble on"

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2023 7:20:00 AM

Marble-ous response, John!