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Losing My Marbles and Then Some

I scratched my head
    my brain fell out
  It ambled 'cross the table

  Stared at me
    most curiously, grinned ~
  Then pronounced me disabled

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Marikate Kingston

July 15, 2023 at 9:59 PM

I heard that only smart brains can 'amble' Tee hee...

Michael Tor

June 28, 2023 at 7:26 PM

Ha ha love the ending... It made sense, ha ha..

Shirley Hawkins

June 28, 2023 at 6:25 PM

Ha! Ha! A FAVE for me, Gershon. No strain No brain Mine just fell Down the drain Met yours on its travels As our brains try to unravel Then it started to rain Washing our brains away again

Gershon Wolf

June 28, 2023 at 7:17 PM

Sounds like marbles are rolling ALL over the place here, Shirley! What fun! Heh-heh, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

June 28, 2023 at 10:48 AM

LOL…wow!

J. Summers

June 28, 2023 at 7:04 AM

At least when your brain fell out it “ambled” across the table. Mine just laid there and quivered slightly. John

J. Summers

June 28, 2023 at 5:56 PM

Strawberry jelly!

Gershon Wolf

June 28, 2023 at 7:53 AM

Oooh. That gives me the old goosebumps, John. Did your brain look more like strawberry jelly, grape jam, or calves liver?! lol. Thanks for the smiles, Gershon

John Lawless

June 28, 2023 at 4:46 AM

AH, but who makes best use of their marbles....he who has 100% of them and uses only 73% or he who has 73% and uses 100% if them???? "Marble on MacBeth, marble on"

Gershon Wolf

June 28, 2023 at 7:20 AM

Marble-ous response, John!

Losing My Marbles and Then Some

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