Russell Sivey Poet Shadorma

Losing Love

I can’t see
Unconscious I am
Blows within
Losing love
My eyes see the love leave me
Painful episode

Russell Sivey

Form: Shadorma

Entrant into Brian Strand's "TWO TO FIFTEEN" contest

2/7/2012

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Jack Horne February 8, 2012 at 1:31 PM Well described, my friend

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 8, 2012 at 12:58 PM a painful episode when luv has ended .. lovely emotion exudes from this contest entry Russell.. much success .. a stirring gem luv..

Nette Onclaud February 8, 2012 at 10:57 AM happy you are into shadorma, russell.. a sensitive piece that puts my past contest on this form to shame, lol... you just pulled me in!... grreat stuff with winning streaks..:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song February 8, 2012 at 5:48 AM Powerful emotions in your shadorma, Russell..I would hate to experience these...wow. If this is your first shot at this form, great creativity in theme! Off to read your footles next. Have a great day. Gwendolen

Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2012 at 3:41 AM Yes, a painful episode Russell.Good luck in the contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich February 7, 2012 at 9:57 PM Oh, so this is shadorma, huh? You make me curious to check it out! I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest, Russell.

Robert Pettit February 7, 2012 at 9:52 PM Good form for a shadorma Russell. Good luck with this.