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Losing Love

I can’t see Unconscious I am Blows within Losing love My eyes see the love leave me Painful episode Russell Sivey Form: Shadorma Entrant into Brian Strand's "TWO TO FIFTEEN" contest 2/7/2012

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Jack Horne

Date: 2/8/2012 1:31:00 PM

Well described, my friend

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/8/2012 12:58:00 PM

a painful episode when luv has ended .. lovely emotion exudes from this contest entry Russell.. much success .. a stirring gem luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/8/2012 10:57:00 AM

happy you are into shadorma, russell.. a sensitive piece that puts my past contest on this form to shame, lol... you just pulled me in!... grreat stuff with winning streaks..:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 2/8/2012 5:48:00 AM

Powerful emotions in your shadorma, Russell..I would hate to experience these...wow. If this is your first shot at this form, great creativity in theme! Off to read your footles next. Have a great day. Gwendolen

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/8/2012 3:41:00 AM

Yes, a painful episode Russell.Good luck in the contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2012 9:57:00 PM

Oh, so this is shadorma, huh? You make me curious to check it out! I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest, Russell.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/7/2012 9:52:00 PM

Good form for a shadorma Russell. Good luck with this.