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Losing Her Glow

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Drained fingers jot sweet memory calling Pam’s name in every bloom, as laced nights recall the glory of fondness born from love’s heirloom... Time pauses… her Glow swirls on trees where romps christen fire tasting life.. And though wonder darts to appease pale the ticks, yearning for dear wife. Laura Loo's Contest:Second Place Only Contest III Submitted 2/5/2016 Judged 2/6/2016 For the 'LOST' Theme Contest

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/26/2016 5:10:00 AM

A very emotional piece.... Congrats Nette, for your WIN in the 2nd Place Contest!! ;-)

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/24/2016 7:38:00 PM

I remember this beautiful but so sad poem, Nette. Congratulations on another well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo

Date: 10/24/2016 5:24:00 PM

sweet Nette...my gave line.."glory of fondness born from love's heirloom"...wow, so beautiful...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being in my contest :)-luloo

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/5/2016 4:53:00 AM

This is heart breaking Nette so well expressed too, excellent pen hugs 7

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/10/2016 12:26:00 PM

A special poem of loss and the coping with it. Though it deals with a sad situation it is most beautifully contrived and rendered. Well done nette! Regards, Keith

Paul Callus

Date: 2/7/2016 3:49:00 PM

Loss of a loved one, sadly felt as he yearns in vain; emotions brought to the fore thanks to beautiful imagery and choice of words. The complimenting picture is great! I notice that this is a winning poem, so congratulations, Nette!:) hugs // paul

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/7/2016 8:02:00 AM

Congratulation, Nette, on your placement for this excellent write.

Constance La France

Date: 2/7/2016 12:17:00 AM

nette, congratulations on your win in my Lost contest with this sadly beautiful write and I love the image too ~

Jan Allison

Date: 2/6/2016 6:28:00 PM

sad but beautiful imagery as ever Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/6/2016 5:06:00 PM

Nette, such beautiful but sad imagery in your words that portray this deep loss. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 4:42:00 PM

Nette, Congrats on your lovely "LOST" win. LINDA

Lu Loo

Date: 2/6/2016 4:21:00 PM

Congrats on your placement Nette *Smiles* -luloo:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2016 6:44:00 PM

wow, Nette. I LOVE this one on that feeling of loss for a dear loved one. VEry beautiful imagery. I think I will fave this gem!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2016 4:04:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..It reads like a winner to me..Way to go.."here rainclouds grip…into nowhere biting the night with sharpened jaw"..I especially like these lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/5/2016 2:35:00 PM

Superb poem that captivates the reader with its eloquence and beauty, dear nette! Good luck!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/5/2016 1:20:00 PM

- Wonderful written Nette, sad to read - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manny Paras

Date: 2/5/2016 1:14:00 PM

I see you have crafted this with a style that is incredible; the haltered, pained mood is consistent and part of your distinct design. Master poetess, that's you!

Carly Lalion

Date: 2/5/2016 1:08:00 PM

You paint a picture filled with sorrow and some comfort. Another deep poem brushed with a prolific pen and an imagery that is extraordinary like " love's heirloom"!

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/5/2016 9:41:00 AM

Wow, love this nette, good luck in contest