Nette Onclaud Poet Quatrain

Notes About The Poem

 

 

Losing Her Glow

Drained fingers jot sweet memory
calling Pam’s name in every bloom,
as laced nights recall the glory
of fondness born from love’s heirloom...
Time pauses… her Glow swirls on trees
where romps christen fire tasting life..
And though wonder darts to appease
pale the ticks, yearning for dear wife.



Laura Loo's Contest:Second Place Only Contest III
Submitted 2/5/2016    Judged 2/6/2016
For the 'LOST'  Theme Contest

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Teddy Kimathi October 26, 2016 at 5:10 AM A very emotional piece.... Congrats Nette, for your WIN in the 2nd Place Contest!! ;-)

Sandra Haight October 24, 2016 at 7:38 PM I remember this beautiful but so sad poem, Nette. Congratulations on another well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars October 24, 2016 at 5:24 PM sweet Nette...my gave line.."glory of fondness born from love's heirloom"...wow, so beautiful...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being in my contest :)-luloo

Shadow Hamilton March 5, 2016 at 4:53 AM This is heart breaking Nette so well expressed too, excellent pen hugs 7

Keith Bickerstaffe February 10, 2016 at 12:26 PM A special poem of loss and the coping with it. Though it deals with a sad situation it is most beautifully contrived and rendered. Well done nette! Regards, Keith

Paul Callus February 7, 2016 at 3:49 PM Loss of a loved one, sadly felt as he yearns in vain; emotions brought to the fore thanks to beautiful imagery and choice of words. The complimenting picture is great! I notice that this is a winning poem, so congratulations, Nette!:) hugs // paul

Daniel Turner February 7, 2016 at 8:02 AM Congratulation, Nette, on your placement for this excellent write.

Constance La France February 7, 2016 at 12:17 AM nette, congratulations on your win in my Lost contest with this sadly beautiful write and I love the image too ~

Jan Allison February 6, 2016 at 6:28 PM sad but beautiful imagery as ever Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight February 6, 2016 at 5:06 PM Nette, such beautiful but sad imagery in your words that portray this deep loss. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 4:42 PM Nette, Congrats on your lovely "LOST" win. LINDA

Beautiful Scars February 6, 2016 at 4:21 PM Congrats on your placement Nette *Smiles* -luloo:)

Andrea Dietrich February 5, 2016 at 6:44 PM wow, Nette. I LOVE this one on that feeling of loss for a dear loved one. VEry beautiful imagery. I think I will fave this gem!!

Sara Kendrick February 5, 2016 at 4:04 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..It reads like a winner to me..Way to go.."here rainclouds grip…into nowhere biting the night with sharpened jaw"..I especially like these lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis February 5, 2016 at 2:35 PM Superb poem that captivates the reader with its eloquence and beauty, dear nette! Good luck!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 5, 2016 at 1:20 PM - Wonderful written Nette, sad to read - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manny Paras February 5, 2016 at 1:14 PM I see you have crafted this with a style that is incredible; the haltered, pained mood is consistent and part of your distinct design. Master poetess, that's you!

Carly Lalion February 5, 2016 at 1:08 PM You paint a picture filled with sorrow and some comfort. Another deep poem brushed with a prolific pen and an imagery that is extraordinary like " love's heirloom"!

Harry Horsman February 5, 2016 at 9:41 AM Wow, love this nette, good luck in contest