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Losing Her Glow

Drained fingers jot sweet memory
calling Pam’s name in every bloom,
as laced nights recall the glory
of fondness born from love’s heirloom...
Time pauses… her Glow swirls on trees
where romps christen fire tasting life..
And though wonder darts to appease
pale the ticks, yearning for dear wife.



Laura Loo's Contest:Second Place Only Contest III
Submitted 2/5/2016    Judged 2/6/2016
For the 'LOST'  Theme Contest

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2016

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Teddy Kimathi Date: 10/26/2016 5:10:00 AM A very emotional piece.... Congrats Nette, for your WIN in the 2nd Place Contest!! ;-) Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 10/24/2016 7:38:00 PM I remember this beautiful but so sad poem, Nette. Congratulations on another well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 10/24/2016 5:24:00 PM sweet Nette...my gave line.."glory of fondness born from love's heirloom"...wow, so beautiful...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being in my contest :)-luloo Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 3/5/2016 4:53:00 AM This is heart breaking Nette so well expressed too, excellent pen hugs 7 Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 2/10/2016 12:26:00 PM A special poem of loss and the coping with it. Though it deals with a sad situation it is most beautifully contrived and rendered. Well done nette! Regards, Keith Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/7/2016 3:49:00 PM Loss of a loved one, sadly felt as he yearns in vain; emotions brought to the fore thanks to beautiful imagery and choice of words. The complimenting picture is great! I notice that this is a winning poem, so congratulations, Nette!:) hugs // paul Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 2/7/2016 8:02:00 AM Congratulation, Nette, on your placement for this excellent write. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 2/7/2016 12:17:00 AM nette, congratulations on your win in my Lost contest with this sadly beautiful write and I love the image too ~ Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 2/6/2016 6:28:00 PM sad but beautiful imagery as ever Nette congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 2/6/2016 5:06:00 PM Nette, such beautiful but sad imagery in your words that portray this deep loss. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/6/2016 4:42:00 PM Nette, Congrats on your lovely "LOST" win. LINDA Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 2/6/2016 4:21:00 PM Congrats on your placement Nette *Smiles* -luloo:) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/5/2016 6:44:00 PM wow, Nette. I LOVE this one on that feeling of loss for a dear loved one. VEry beautiful imagery. I think I will fave this gem!! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/5/2016 4:04:00 PM Enjoyed reading your contest entry..It reads like a winner to me..Way to go.."here rainclouds grip…into nowhere biting the night with sharpened jaw"..I especially like these lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/5/2016 2:35:00 PM Superb poem that captivates the reader with its eloquence and beauty, dear nette! Good luck! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/5/2016 1:20:00 PM - Wonderful written Nette, sad to read - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Manny Paras Date: 2/5/2016 1:14:00 PM I see you have crafted this with a style that is incredible; the haltered, pained mood is consistent and part of your distinct design. Master poetess, that's you! Login to Reply

Carly Lalion Date: 2/5/2016 1:08:00 PM You paint a picture filled with sorrow and some comfort. Another deep poem brushed with a prolific pen and an imagery that is extraordinary like " love's heirloom"! Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 2/5/2016 9:41:00 AM Wow, love this nette, good luck in contest Login to Reply