Losing An Argument

Caught up in the frenzy
paranoid judgments disguised as reason
woe and viruses 
push the man into the dark

he wallows in fear
coughs and sputters
looks up,
knows not to beg the universe
for his imprisonment this time

his insides ache with the venom
bitten into him
soul changes from gas to liquid to solid 
and back
unsure of its own density

the man fights his own capitulation

“better to die on his feet, than beg on his knees”

he rises up 
leans on his shadow

begins the long walk.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 12, 2011 at 5:55 PM
Jack... stopping by to say hi.. and read a few poem... this title caught my attention.. i guess one long walk will do, when losing an argument.. better yet ,, the walk will have to happen before the argument as well.....Have yourself a wonderful night..Thank you for sharing your interesting thoughts and words. Take care ;-) ..p.d.
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