Lose It!

I need to lose some weight
My stomach isn't great
Do some exercise
And don't compromise
Then I hope I'll deflate!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 4:31 PM
I sure know the feeling, Joshua. one we can all relate to!
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