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Lord Take Me To Heaven Don'T Be So Mean

Like a deer caught in spotlight by tip of the antler she froze when she saw the upcoming train with a slow motion move like an Austrian landler she ran from the danger, her only domain The night was so frozen it held every tear unable to move she just sat on the rail her heart was a pumping the moon was a smear as she wiped out the gravel and pulled out the nail The stars were now shining but she couldn't see the beauty of sky the fabric of green for night was a falling, she made one last plea Lord take me to heaven, don't be so mean.

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Date: 2/22/2023 11:47:00 PM
The angst of the young woman caught between death and the pains of life is wonderfully brought out, Vie:)
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Date: 2/22/2023 11:08:00 PM
this is so beautiful, but i flee desperation when i Can, thanks for sharing, this is poignant and emotive yann
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Date: 2/22/2023 7:07:00 AM
I hear the cry of despair, seeking an escape to heaven. A well written emotive poem, Vienna.
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Date: 2/22/2023 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, many young people these days are not equipped for the hardships. Often they give up,
Date: 2/22/2023 7:04:00 AM
A heartfelt poem. God is not mean. He will take it to Heaven. Lovely poem. Hugs.
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Date: 2/22/2023 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Victor, its a bout a girl who has had enough pain and tries to commit suicide but changes her mind.

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