Lord, Remember Me

(This poem views the Crucifixion through the eyes of the thief who hung on a cross beside Jesus)

I know the crimes that have brought me to this cross, 
and that I deserve to die.
But this Man cannot deserve such torture. 
All I can do is to wonder why.

This broken Man who is hanging beside me; 
what evil has He done?
Is the only crime He ever committed 
simply claiming to be God’s Son?

If I were Him I would just give up. 
I would curse my accusers and die.
Yet all I have heard from this brave Man 
is a barely audible sigh.

There is something different about this Man 
that I simply cannot explain,
the manner in which He handles suffering 
and the way He deals with His pain.

Could this Jesus be who He says He is? 
I think I am starting to believe.
If I confess my sins and regrets to Him, 
will His blessing I receive?

So I gathered my courage and spoke to Him. 
I asked Him to “remember me”.
Now I feel the weight of my sin has lifted, 
as if my soul has been set free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Mcconnell Avatar
January 23, 2022 at 7:22 AM
This is definitely one of your best Lanette, such great insightfulness and with lovely rhyme with good flow too. A beautiful piece! Blessings always,Gordon
Emmett Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:49 PM
My gosh - WHAT a poem - thank you! That last stanza really grabbed me
Kinch  Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 12:37 AM
Love the angle you have chosen in this write. Excellent 7 from me.
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