Amy Bohack Poet Rhyme

Lord Make Things Right

I thank You for the day
That You let me in Your life
My heart filled with excitement
I was thrilled with sheer delight
But somehow it has faded
And I can't feel the warm sunlight
My thoughts of You are jaded
Come close, My Lord, make things right

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Rowena Velasco August 9, 2025 at 7:29 AM This poem really captures that honest moment when faith feels distant but there’s still a deep longing for connection. I like the simple, heartfelt way you express both gratitude and the desire for things to feel right again. It’s relatable and touching.

Robert Pettit June 30, 2025 at 4:44 PM I know He will help you in your time of need. Good write.