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Lord, I Pantoum You

When things in life do not go according to plan, I feel so bad about myself and lose my faith; when grief entered my heart and soul I ran, with a glimmer of hope remaining deep beneath. I feel so bad about myself and lose my faith, the teachings of childhood are rooted inside me; with a glimmer of hope remaining deep beneath, oh, putting my faith in the Lord will set me free. The teachings of childhood are rooted inside me, believing in Heaven is not about bondage; oh, putting my faith in the Lord will set me free, with the Lord by my side this life I can manage. Believing in Heaven is not about bondage, my heart was restless until I truly believed; with the Lord at my side this life I can manage, now, I give him my struggle and peace is achieved. My heart was restless until I truly believed, when grief entered my heart and soul I ran; now, I give him my struggle and peace is achieved, when things in life do not go according to plan. _____________________ May 3, 2018 Written for the contest, Lord, I Pantoum You sponsor, James Edward Lee Sr.
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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 5:43 PM
Heart is restless in many till they believe.So proud to be on same list with you and other serious writers. Thank you congrats! And thanks! !!!!
Gentry Avatar
June 21, 2018 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations on your top win! Well done!
Roper Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 9:28 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Broken Wings... the teaching as children always stays rooted with the hope that it leads them to the path of God.. Wonderful write and wisdom.. Hugs Eve ~' *
Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Congrats on first place!
Gauthier Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, BW.
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