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Lord, Help Me

Lord,
Help me
I can’t go on
I’m not that strong
It’s been so long
Help me

Lord, 
I’ve lost my song
I’ve been done wrong
I don’t belong
Lord, help me
Help me, Lord
Help me

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Richard Lamoureux

May 2, 2015 at 8:33 AM

I like your response to Lyric man, that is a poem within itself.

Justin Bordner

July 23, 2014 at 2:16 PM

From the phrase, " Help ME ", you can create the word peel. So peel the fear away my friend. Heart warming humility Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

July 23, 2014 at 2:22 PM

Justin, you've come looking for me. I'm glad. Yes, you are very observant to see that...PEEL...peel away the fear. Yes. I'm waiting for a new write from you, Justin. I will come looking for you.

David Brown

July 20, 2014 at 2:13 PM

Powerful and compelling work Eileen, from a powerful and compelling artist. You can go on!

Eileen Manassian

July 21, 2014 at 9:32 AM

:) Thank you, David. Sometimes...going on is the only thing that is left to do! I'm glad I have a 19 year old angel of a daughter whose welfare is dear to me. I would not want her to needlessly suffer...and so...I go on. Thank you for visiting me.

Chuck Melugin

July 20, 2014 at 12:06 PM

A hurting heart pouring out to a forgiving ear. 7 My best, chuck

Eileen Manassian

July 21, 2014 at 9:33 AM

Thank you, Chuck. Yes...you got the essence of this write. He does have a forgiving ear...and his heart is attuned to our cries. Bless you for your lovely visit.

Tim Smith

July 20, 2014 at 9:53 AM

He hears you. He just wants you to find the answers....Love your beautiful pen...hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian

July 20, 2014 at 9:55 AM

Tim...You are a source of joy...Never change who you are. Thank you for visiting me and for caring...for loving my pen...my pen is who I am. Everything I write...is from my soul. Thank you for your visit. HUGSSSSS

Richard Lamoureux

July 20, 2014 at 9:41 AM

Heading out to tennis, will check out later. Have a great day Eileen

Eileen Manassian

July 20, 2014 at 9:43 AM

Do it, Richard....Federer style....

Richard Lamoureux

July 20, 2014 at 8:55 AM

His help is in the way. Based on what I have read lately I seriously doubt you have lost your song Eileen.

Eileen Manassian

July 20, 2014 at 8:59 AM

Richard...... I've missed you. Thanks. I have a blog up. Tell me what u think.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

July 20, 2014 at 6:41 AM

A lovely devotiönal song poem in sweet rhyme. Take care Eileen.

Eileen Manassian

July 20, 2014 at 9:44 AM

Thanks ever so much for your visit and kind comment.

Nette Onclaud

July 20, 2014 at 1:47 AM

soulful devotional i would like to whisper myself, eileen... this is divine .. huggs

Eileen Manassian

July 20, 2014 at 1:54 AM

Written in tears, Nette...Wrung from my soul...He hears...even before I speak...He is patient with me...He loves me...i know that. If only I weren't such a rebellious child of His. i want what I want...even when it isn't good for me. :( Never mind...good thing HIS love is unchanging...and unconditional.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 20, 2014 at 1:42 AM

Eileen what I hv construed from ur writes is ur strength n boldness,, god bless u dear always // Upma//

Eileen Manassian

July 20, 2014 at 1:52 AM

Thank you, Dr. Upma...I was once a very spiritual person...Almost breathing the air of heaven. Much has happened to me since, but I know I can count on God's unfailing love. He never leaves me...I wander now and again...but I know I can always come back, and He will take me in...He is only a whisper away. thank you for being so kind to me. I have come to look forward to your visits.

Lord, Help Me

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